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wordyefficacy

[EXO] [Fanfiction] Taste

Sep 11, 2012 01:53

Title: Taste
Pairing: Kai/Kyungsoo
Rating: NC-17
Length: 3,935 words
Summary: Really, Jongin should know by now that Kyungsoo might look innocent, but he is anything but.
A/N: Uh. This is just really gratuitious smut? Warnings for Kyungsoo's dirty mouth and all the explicity haha. Unbeta'ed and dedicated to airplanewishes XD

( “Why did it take you forever to come over? My mouth was getting tired. And much as I liked sucking that lollipop, you’ve made me drop it.” His gaze drops down to the very visible tent in Jongin’s pants. “But that’s okay, I think I’ve found something else I can suck on instead that will be even more tasty.” )

fanfiction, fandom: exo, oneshot, pairing: kai/kyungsoo, rating: nc-17

Comments 27

read0write September 10 2012, 19:51:01 UTC

heeheehee that was hot
lol at kyungsoo shoving jongin off the bed when he asked for the next time heeheehee
such a naughty boy kyungsoo is but jongin enjoyed (so did kyungsoo ^^)
heeheehee no way jongin had a chance to resist lol
heeheehee :D

solitair September 11 2012, 14:33:48 UTC

Hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed it 8D
This Kyungsoo was really fun to write. Alot of the times it is Jongin who initiates the sexy times but you know, I think Kyungsoo isn't as innocent as he looks, at all XD

sweetricebuns September 10 2012, 21:41:07 UTC

um.
wow.
this is the first fic i've read today.
so uhm.
will not regret anythinggggg.

my brain . . . has been destroyed.
well obviously.
if you're brain so diligently imagines and plays out every scene,
wouldn't it be quite brain-cracking?
sighs. bad cerebrum.

i love this.
i love kkamjong.
i love kyungsoo.
i love you.
;u; my mood is the best for todat now.

solitair September 11 2012, 14:34:50 UTC

/pats your brain/

Is that a good thing or a bad thing? XD Never mind that it's a really hot thing

I love Jongin and Kyungsoo and I love you too 8D Thank you for reading!!

khrysallis1106 September 11 2012, 08:18:59 UTC

Kyungsoo is a fucking demon in disguise, but damn, I love him here for being able to frustrate Jongin so much (it's no secret that I'm very annoyed by Jongin these days because of his sex face and gorgeous and everything about him in general but that's besides the point ahem.)

The sex was absofuckinglutely hot, and I really enjoyed seeing Kyungsoo (kinda) top. Somebody needs to put Jongin in his rightful place for once LOL!

And goddamnit Flora, I don't think I'll be able to look at lollipops in an innocent way anymore, right on top with chocolate/strawberry fondue and cake. FML.

solitair September 11 2012, 14:37:54 UTC

Definitely. It just shows up to us in flashes when his hamsap feis shows up, and of course, 95% of the time when he has that expression on, he's staring at Jongin LOL Kyungsoo is perfect for keeping Jongin in line in the bedroom /cackles/

Slutty!Kyungsoo wrote himself effortlessly I tell you. He was totally in control of the whole fic and obviously, Jongin too!

8D I. That is uh. A good thing? /hides

airplanewishes September 11 2012, 09:37:50 UTC

ODG. That's really just what was screaming in my head the whole time I was reading because BECAUSE. What else can I say?! Do Kyungsoo is the devil. He's not innocent. He was never innocent. Jongin has been tempted by the devil.

LOL. But seriously. Kyungsoo sucking on that lollipop was so hot. I'm surprised Jongin didn't come just by watching him. >< All the dirty talk was crazy sexy. And Jongin getting hard twice and getting off twice! /cackles/ Kyungsoo really knows what he's doing. Where did he learn all of this?!?!

Lollipops will now forever be associated with Kyungsoo and sex. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!!!

I'm so happy with this. /dances/ And you dedicated it to me because I was so freakin' impatient. LOL. Thank you for your patience and I'm sorry I fell asleep. orz U DA BOMB, FLORA!

solitair September 11 2012, 14:44:28 UTC

Oh, Kyungsoo is definitely a demon in disguise. Jongin really has no idea at all. Kyungsoo has a lot of hidden sides, I bet.

I was thinking of him using a few different types of foodstuff, but hey, lollipops seemed to fit the most kekeke. Lol Jongin probably would have come if he had been touching himself 8D Because pretty sure Kyungsoo has mouth-fucking pornstar noises down pat. I wonder where he learnt it from too LMFAO

New OTP. Well, you can think of Kyungsoo every time you see a lollipop? 8DDDDD CREATED A MONSTER MWAHAHAH

I'm glad its to your liking 8D I wanted to finish it off last night anyway lolololol. THANK YOU FRANCES <3

kickchu September 11 2012, 15:32:43 UTC

Help.
This is one of the hottest thing I've ever read. I love demanding Kyungsoo, I love it so much. You have no idea.
Than you for writing this and publishing it, it's one of the best things that has happened to this community. Going to read it forever.
I love you.

solitair September 11 2012, 16:33:12 UTC

Hi ^^
OTL I'm so glad that you like it that much! Demanding Kyungsoo was really fun to write, especially since all of the time it's normally Jongin calling the shots; I felt like I wanted to try my hand at writing a Kyungsoo who called the shots instead.
I love you too :3
Thank you for reading!