Kakashi + Sakura One-Shot.

Nov 02, 2008 17:28

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...Because, as stereotype_vamp said, Kakashi totally has this coming to him. XD

Set...vaguely some time after canon, I guess? Naruto and Sasuke are who-knows-where. Somewhere not in this fic. It's not really important.

But it is related to this. Kinda. Sorta. But not really, since the Sakura in this piece is a lot more evil kick-ass than the Sakura in ( Read more... )

label: weekly fic challenge, character: hatake kakashi, genre: gen, genre: humour, character: haruno sakura, pairing: kakasaku

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sowell November 3 2008, 22:50:29 UTC
Dude, Kakashi TOTALLY deserved that. Um...if you want to write a series of their Tuesday night dinners, I would NOT be opposed. Just saying.

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wordsworn November 4 2008, 01:24:47 UTC
Thanks for the vote of confidence, but inspiration tends to strike me pretty randomly; one-shot drabbles are more my thing, and I doubt I'll be able to do a series based on this. =\ Sorry...

I'm flattered that you enjoyed it enough to want more, though. :D

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redbrunja November 4 2008, 00:41:13 UTC
Oh, he so had it coming.

I have to say, though, the middle section, with Sakura laying it out for him felt a little OOC to me - I think she's too concerned with other people's feelings (even post timeskip) to do that, and I think she'd be more likely to tell it it was totally fine and not to worry about it and of course she wasn't hurt when she was, and that Kakashi would know it.

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wordsworn November 4 2008, 01:18:07 UTC
Well, at first she did tell him it was fine, but he kept pushing the issue. XD And I agree that she might've been a little forward about his FAIL!teaching, but she's not really his student anymore, and now that she's worked so hard and come so far, having him just suddenly step back in and tell her she needs to work on things she's already working on...might trigger some brutal honesty.

...And if that doesn't convince you...I did it for the lulz? :D?

Thank you for being honest with your feedback! Constructive criticism = ♥.

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redbrunja November 4 2008, 01:22:07 UTC
You're welcome.

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pyxis_lynx November 4 2008, 00:47:07 UTC
HAH! Kakashi deserves the guilt (especially since I don't recall him having any in canon naruto world). Although I wanted to see him squirm some more, but this fic has already made me cackling and grinning XD I really like guilt-ridden Kakashi LOL

Ehehe~ and I love the sickly sweet smile that warningly tells you to just nod and say yes

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thatreevesgirl November 4 2008, 06:58:52 UTC
That ending was priceless, and had me laughing my ass off. I really enjoyed the fic. <3

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japanesebread November 4 2008, 10:41:40 UTC
:D aww, it nearly made me cry, because yes, getting left behind hurts like hell, and he'd. BETTER GET IT.

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