[fic] Moments

[aneko_ariyohou]

Title: Moments
Author: aneko_ariyohou 
Rating: PG (for that one bit of swearing)
Characters/Pairings: John, Dean
Prompt: #7: John/Dean - Lock&Load
Spoilers: Um, none outside of season 1, if any.
Word count: 441, which is odd because it seemed longer.
Warnings: Like I said, a bit of swearing?
Summary: It's these moments that Dean remembers the most.
Notes: I seriously

Comments

[aneko_ariyohou]

Ahaha, whenever I write, it tends to be short moments in time. But I'm glad it's likeable! :'D

[defiantlygreen]

Father and son bondage bonding. I like seeing these moments between John and Dean; you wrote it really well. :)

"John barely smiles, equivalent to saying "Bastard's going down", before his expression hardens into the kind of focus only obtained from being a soldier."

--I loved, loved, LOVED this line.

Really well done. Great job! ^^

[aneko_ariyohou]

Aww, thank you for the love! It's been a long LONG time since I've written anything for others to read. So I'm glad you liked it!
That's one of my favorite lines as well. <3 I'm glad I got the feelings across.

[soldierly]

Lovely fic and I will tag for you, but I do ask that you put the fic behind a cut. <3

[aneko_ariyohou]

Thank you very much!
And... I don't know how to put things behind a cut. I'm sorry.

[soldierly]

Oh :o Okay.

http://www.livejournal.com/support/faqbrowse.bml?faqid=75

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[aneko_ariyohou]

Thank you very much.
Took me forever to get done (some reason LJ was being a brat last night), but now I know.