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Mar 07, 2008 23:00

Made From the Sharpest Things, 9/?
Fandom: Bandom AU (primarily My Chemical Romance and Fall Out Boy, with various and sundry other bands).
Rating: R (language, violence, slight sexuality)
Pairings: Eventual Frank/Gerard, Pete/Patrick
Summary: What happens when the video for "A Little Less 16 Candles..." and repeat playings of "Vampires Will Never ( Read more... )

pairing: frank/gerard, fanfiction, verse: sharpest things, fandom: bandom: multiband, unfinished

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shoemaster March 8 2008, 06:05:06 UTC
you're killing me here with the cliff hangers. I am kind of tired right now and failing at words but :DDDDDDDDDD yay for more of this! and the fight scenes in the last chapter were nicely handled and yeah.

Gerard: OM NOM NOM Frank

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jezrana March 8 2008, 06:28:39 UTC
The cliffhangers could have been worse! But I'm not that mean. Thanks especially for mentioning the fight scenes, I always feel awkward writing those. *g*

Gerard: OM NOM NOM Frank

Ah ha ha, BASICALLY. Only plus *GUILT AND ANGST*, but really, those are par for the course.

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shaedowcat March 8 2008, 14:40:27 UTC
Bweee!!!

It's currently half past midnight, so I'm not real coherent right now, but Yay! Vampire fic!

I agree with shoemaster...the fight scenes were great. It reminded me of the fights I get into for Krav.

“You can kick my ass later,” he says, calmly. “Get him to a fucking hospital.”

I love that line, and I don't know why...that and the "swooning in Gerard's arms" bit.

Will come back with more feedback when I'm feeling more coherent. Thanks for writing! Please write more soon!

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mivsi March 8 2008, 16:49:31 UTC
Woo! Just, like, yesterday I was thinking about this and how much it was be awesome if it was updated soon. Life works out pretty awesome, sometimes. :D

I'm not going to lie: one of my favorite things about vampire fics is that, eventually, there's always a scene with needwantbloodnow. It's usually always one of my favorite scenes and hi! Here's one!

It was awesome. I'm very much in love with this story, and I'll be wayyyy happy when it's updated again, whenever that may be. I love your Gerard and Frank so much!

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losile March 8 2008, 18:07:57 UTC
Damnit woman, you've got me hooked now heehee. This is delightfully good.

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tabula_x_rasa March 9 2008, 05:28:12 UTC
Ok, this seems like a good time to leave you some of the feedback I totally owe you. I'm usually not big on vampire fic in general but this really works and I'm totally addicted. It's really sort of cinematic! So this is the (belated) part where you must permit me to tell you how ardently I admire and love you. And stuff. <3

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