Comments | words_unbound: The Keepsake Discovery [TBBT; Sheldon/Penny]

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The Keepsake Discovery [TBBT; Sheldon/Penny]

Aug 15, 2009 00:14

TITLE: The Keepsake Discovery
FANDOM: The Big Bang Theory
PAIRING: Sheldon/Penny
SPOILERS: Series
RATING: PG
SUMMARY: ( You know you're not supposed to be in here, but you just can't help yourself. )

fandom: the big bang theory, character: penny, character: sheldon cooper, pairing: sheldon/penny

Comments 27

7gifts August 15 2009, 11:43:55 UTC

The sweetest thinng :)

regalish August 27 2009, 04:52:03 UTC

Thanks very much! :)

qblackheart August 15 2009, 15:49:14 UTC

Awww - this was really adorable! I LOVED the post-its!

regalish August 27 2009, 04:52:25 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked this :D

evening_shadow August 15 2009, 16:03:58 UTC

Very nicely done. I felt like a little hitch-hiker on Penny's shoulder. The last line is wonderful. Looking forward to more from you.

regalish August 27 2009, 04:53:15 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the 2nd person POV. I've always loved it for the exact reason you mention -- feeling like a little hitch-hiker on the character's shoulder. :)

ruby_caspar August 15 2009, 16:14:30 UTC

Oh god, the last line. THE LAST LINE.

I heart this fic a ridiculous amount - so sweet. I loved the post-it notes!

regalish August 27 2009, 04:54:00 UTC

Aww, thanks! Glad you liked it. The post-it notes were my favorite to write :D

artic_fox August 15 2009, 18:30:47 UTC

Wow, indeed! I admit I'm usually wary of first or second person fics, but this blew me out of the water, and I think you did a wonderful job. I love how you had all the objects and the memories behind them, and then his reaction to finding her, and the eventual realisation. Great job!

regalish August 27 2009, 04:56:03 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this POV.

I'm usually wary of first/second person fics too (I'm reading a novel right now that was written in 1st person and it's still kinda hard to adjust to), but second person is just such a fun challenge to write. You're basically just setting yourself directly in the character's shoes - thoughts, emotions et al - and pulling yourself that much further into the story.

Anyway. Thanks again!!