They have build a strong relationship in which the two of them are completely comfortable and happy but reality is something you can never avoid.
Yay!! that was deep and sad , especially because this is going to end soon (the marriage and the fic).
I fond to this fic because it was soooo fun , adorable and stress relieving to read it that I going to start crying? (PMS for sure).
In my personal opinion all the characters developed and performed in a believable way and that is exactly how they will behave in the series.I'm wondering how this is going to end. Good Luck!!! (sorry for all the grammar mistakes ^__^)
Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! This story has been such a blast for me to write, and if I could, I'd totally make it go on forever, hehehe.
Alas, it must come to an end. But hey, there are still five chapters left! Chapter 20 will go up soon :D
Oh, another extremely wonderful chapter! I just love those little moments that you give them that are so incredibly sweet and so very in character, like the Meerkat thing. They just click on so many levels. And the part where she asked him to stay with her! God, I loved that!!! Especially the line where Jack said, "That's what you're telling yourself, then?" He so knows that she's in love with him. He's quite a few steps ahead of her, and I think his constantly mentioning that it will be over is just part of his plan in keeping her! He's a sly little devil. Another line that I adored: "When I woke up, you weren't there." Such a simple statement, and I could hear Jack saying that so perfectly in my head. *squeeeeeeeee!!!!!* I loved that line. Gah, I am so in love with this fic! I am going to be so sad when it's all over, but I'm dying to know how it will end. I absolutely love your writing!
Hehehe, thanks so much as usual, doll! It always means so much :D
I couldn't resist the Meerkat thing. Jack's such an adorable little man-boy when it comes to cute animal stuff. And I definitely can't resist that Liz denial -- Jack's so on to her ;) I always saw him as pretty sly and slick, and always a few steps ahead.
Glad you're still enjoying this! I am pleased to report I've finished writing the entire fic; there are five chapters left for me to post! I'm excited, but at the same time I kinda wish I could write tons more. Because man, these two are amazingly fun to write.
No! I don't want this to be over soon :-( *throws tantrum*
*calms down* Okay - we can blame that on me being tired. I love this! Jack is so absolutely in character, I could totally picture him watching Meerkat Manor, grinning and talking to the meerkats. Hee!
Also love that Liz freaked out when she woke up. Awww. She's so completely in love with him, and just can't accept it. Hee!
Another wonderful chapter, Caroline. These updates never disappoint and always make me smile :-)
As for my icon, that is my favourite episode of the XF too :-D
Awwwww, Jac! Hehehe. *gives you candy to ward off the tantrum*
Glad you liked this chapter! I was helpless to resist throwing in the Meerkat stuff. I love Jack and his cute adoration of animal videos :D
And writing stubborn, in-denial Liz is always enjoyable. Liz + Denial = OTP. Forever and ever. Hehehe.
Also? OMG BAD BLOOD. I love that it seems to be everyone's fave ep of XF. SO hilarious, and SO good. I still have Scully's bagel rant completely memorized :D ...I'll spare you, but I totally could type it below.
Woahmygosh, I haven't reviewed in forever! So sorry. =[ I've been really busy lately, as today's the day before I go on my trip to Europe!! 20 days long! -excited-
I loved this chapter. I love Meerkat Manor although I fell out a little bit this year. It's really understandable how Liz had the air of drunkenness because, being a fantastic world traveler (hehe), I know how jet lag feels. xD
Ooooh, Europe! Funtimes! That should be so cool; I've always wanted to go. My best friend's a fantastic world traveler, too :D
Glad you liked this chapter! And MM totally seemed like something Jack would just love, hehehe. I can't get over how cute he was, excited about that panda video. I gotta figure out which ep that was, because man. ♥Jack!!♥
Chapter 20's going up tonight, and if you don't have net access over there, the rest of the fic will be waiting for you when you return!! Good luck, have fun, and be safe! :)
"Oh Apollo, you little scoundrel, stealing Flower's food!"
I have never heard of Meerkat Manor, but now I kind of want to watch it. And it does sound like something Jack would enjoy. Hee.
The ending kind of bummed me out, because Jack is sad about it, isn't he? I mean, I know it'll work out and Liz will admit to him that she's in love with him (she has to!) but oh, Jack.
Heee! I'm not a huge fan of Meerkat Manor personally (don't really see the appeal, heh), but my mom thinks it's adorable. I saw a few minutes and decided immediately that Jack would absolutely have every episode of it TiVo'ed :D
Jack is sad about it; you are correct. Because *soppy voice* he WUVS her! Hehehe.
Maybe I'm perceiving him incorrectly, but beneath the right-wing corporate alpha-male'ness he exudes, I've always seen Jack as being secretly soft-hearted and (kind of) a romantic. *shrug*
Chapter 20 goes up tonight!! :D I'm way too excited about having this thing finished finally, hahaha. 24 chapters!! I'm thrilled I was able to keep it going so long without losing inspiration (like I normally do), lol!
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Yay!! that was deep and sad , especially because this is going to end soon (the marriage and the fic).
I fond to this fic because it was soooo fun , adorable and stress relieving to read it that I going to start crying? (PMS for sure).
In my personal opinion all the characters developed and performed in a believable way and that is exactly how they will behave in the series.I'm wondering how this is going to end. Good Luck!!! (sorry for all the grammar mistakes ^__^)
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Alas, it must come to an end. But hey, there are still five chapters left! Chapter 20 will go up soon :D
Thanks again!
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I couldn't resist the Meerkat thing. Jack's such an adorable little man-boy when it comes to cute animal stuff. And I definitely can't resist that Liz denial -- Jack's so on to her ;) I always saw him as pretty sly and slick, and always a few steps ahead.
Glad you're still enjoying this! I am pleased to report I've finished writing the entire fic; there are five chapters left for me to post! I'm excited, but at the same time I kinda wish I could write tons more. Because man, these two are amazingly fun to write.
Thanks again!
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*calms down* Okay - we can blame that on me being tired. I love this! Jack is so absolutely in character, I could totally picture him watching Meerkat Manor, grinning and talking to the meerkats. Hee!
Also love that Liz freaked out when she woke up. Awww. She's so completely in love with him, and just can't accept it. Hee!
Another wonderful chapter, Caroline. These updates never disappoint and always make me smile :-)
As for my icon, that is my favourite episode of the XF too :-D
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Glad you liked this chapter! I was helpless to resist throwing in the Meerkat stuff. I love Jack and his cute adoration of animal videos :D
And writing stubborn, in-denial Liz is always enjoyable. Liz + Denial = OTP. Forever and ever. Hehehe.
Also? OMG BAD BLOOD. I love that it seems to be everyone's fave ep of XF. SO hilarious, and SO good. I still have Scully's bagel rant completely memorized :D ...I'll spare you, but I totally could type it below.
*giggle*
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I loved this chapter. I love Meerkat Manor although I fell out a little bit this year. It's really understandable how Liz had the air of drunkenness because, being a fantastic world traveler (hehe), I know how jet lag feels. xD
Jack's excitement over MM was so adorkable. ^^
Jack!excited + Liz!denial = OTP.
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Glad you liked this chapter! And MM totally seemed like something Jack would just love, hehehe. I can't get over how cute he was, excited about that panda video. I gotta figure out which ep that was, because man. ♥Jack!!♥
Chapter 20's going up tonight, and if you don't have net access over there, the rest of the fic will be waiting for you when you return!! Good luck, have fun, and be safe! :)
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I have never heard of Meerkat Manor, but now I kind of want to watch it. And it does sound like something Jack would enjoy. Hee.
The ending kind of bummed me out, because Jack is sad about it, isn't he? I mean, I know it'll work out and Liz will admit to him that she's in love with him (she has to!) but oh, Jack.
Love, love, love this.
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Jack is sad about it; you are correct. Because *soppy voice* he WUVS her! Hehehe.
Maybe I'm perceiving him incorrectly, but beneath the right-wing corporate alpha-male'ness he exudes, I've always seen Jack as being secretly soft-hearted and (kind of) a romantic. *shrug*
Chapter 20 goes up tonight!! :D I'm way too excited about having this thing finished finally, hahaha. 24 chapters!! I'm thrilled I was able to keep it going so long without losing inspiration (like I normally do), lol!
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