Watching Over You - Chapter 20 (final chapter)

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Title: Watching Over You - Chapter 20
Author: Bluespire
Pairing: Ville/Bam, Ville/Migé
Summary: Ville is a Viking warrior, eldest son of Kari, a Viking Jarl. Bam is a slave (called a thrall). What happens when Ville pays Bam's slave price and moves him from the kitchens into his bed?
Rating: NC-17 for the series
Disclaimer: While Ville, Bam, Migé

Comments

[meduusje]

awwww sad to see this end!
but what a lovely end it was!
some angst and love...
what more could we ask for!
thank you for once again a wonderful journey!

[bluespire]

Hey, thank YOU for being such a loyal reader and commenter. I struggled with this story quite a lot and the few comments I was getting toward the end there really kept me from abandoning it all together. :)

[annushkazhivago]

Beautiful ending. I enjoyed this story so much. I'm glad everything worked out for them.
Loved this! <3

[bluespire]

Yay. Thanks for sticking with it and letting me know you were still reading. :) And I'm glad the ending worked for ya. I was worried it was a bit too cheesy. I guess I'm a cheese lover at heart. :)

[mildly_neurotic]

That was a great ending. It made me sad that Migé was such a douche but that was tempered by happiness at how loyal ad wise a friend Ville had in Burton. That he got to have Bam and fulfill his societal obligations was just perfect. Sad this is over, thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for writing this!

[bluespire]

Yeah, sorry about Mige. I actually am a big fan of the real Mige. But he had to be used for the bad guy in this. Poor thing. I LOVE the Burton character. Had I more time I would have written whole side plots for Burton and Missy both but this story just didn't speak to me like I needed it too for that kind of time investment. Thanks for sticking with it chica. :) I'm appreciative. :)

[mildly_neurotic]

Will always read what you write! :-)

[bluespire]

You sweet thing. I'm not going to hold you to it though. I'll just appreciate you when you do read. Better that way I think. Thanks lady. :)

[bluespire]

intoxicating *grins* Why thank you, love. You flatter.

Thanks so much, lady, for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. :) Glad you liked. :)

[xaviele]

So sad at the ending... oh how I loved this tale. I thank you profusely for having written it. I loved every single bite.

[bluespire]

You are so welcome. Thanks for keeping with it and for your lovely comments. :) So happy you liked. :)