Watching Over You - Chapter 18

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Title: Watching Over You - Chapter 18
Author: Bluespire
Pairing: Ville/Bam, Ville/Migé
Summary: Ville is a Viking warrior, eldest son of Kari, a Viking Jarl. Bam is a slave (called a thrall). What happens when Ville pays Bam's slave price and moves him from the kitchens into his bed?
Rating: NC-17 for the series
Disclaimer: While Ville, Bam, Migé

Comments

[astoria_froggy]

That was a long wait, my dear ! But oh so very worth it.
The interaction between Ville and Kari is fabulous, you made Kari a very wise man and his words show how much he loves his son.
It's so good to have this story back :)
So .... Ville ... Bam .... sore muscles ... massage .... sounds good to me !!!! Of course I already want to read the next part and see if Ville and Bam get together again soon or if you intend to torture them a bit more lol !
Thanks for the update !

[bluespire]

I know. The wait was too long and all of my chapters are always so short. Sorry. Glad the addition of Kari worked. Muscles and massage, I know *holds her head and moans* This was meant to be a fun fic. I have no idea how it got all tangled and full of frozen angst.

I want them together soon. No more torture. :) Thanks so much for being a loyal reader and commenter and bearing with this story. :)

[mildly_neurotic]

I squealed out loud when I saw this was updated. I love Kari so much he is the best Dad ever. Mige is a poop. LOL I wish Ville could have heard what his Dad was really saying to him. Awesome chapter.

[bluespire]

Yay! So happy you're happy. Yeah, I think Kari might be unreasonably good but who cares? My story right? I needed to use someone who would carry even more weight with Ville than Migé does. I think he heard him. He just doesn't quite have it all worked out yet. He'll get there. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it.

[mildly_neurotic]

He is a man who loves his son no matter what. I'm sure they exist in every time frame. :-) Will always read and comment your stories, but you know this one is dear to me. hehe

[bluespire]

Yeah, I think they are on their way to being together now. It's been a rough road. Lol. Thanks for reading and the comment lady. :)

[annushkazhivago]

Update! Woohoo!
It was nice of Kari trying to talk to Ville. Now Ville, listen to your father.
I have hope for these two. Ville will come around. He can't keep fighting it. :D
Beautiful chapter. It was worth the wait!

[bluespire]

Thanks lady. Glad it was worth the wait since I made everyone wait so effing long. (And when I say everyone I mean the like...8 people who read this, lol) Ugh. Just haven't been able to write but I think I'm coming out of it. We shall see. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. :)

[meduusje]

loved this!
hpoe kari's words will sink in with ville...
so he can stop being so distant and just have fun with bam!

[bluespire]

Yay! So glad you liked! I think they are on the road to goodness now. :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting. :)