Watching Over You - Chapter 17

[words_lie]

Title: Watching Over You - Chapter 17
Author: Bluespire
Pairing: Ville/Bam, Ville/Migé
Summary: Ville is a Viking warrior, eldest son of Kari, a Viking Jarl. Bam is a slave (called a thrall). What happens when Ville pays Bam's slave price and moves him from the kitchens into his bed?
Rating: This chapter, NC-17
Disclaimer: While Ville, Bam, Migé,

Comments

[bluespire]

Yay! FC! :)

[bluespire]

fantastic chapter and worth the wait always. You are so kind. I think it was a long time to wait for so few words but i was worried that if I did not post now, it would be another 4 weeks before I added more. So, there it is. :) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks lady.

[ctyviray]

Thanks for friending and letting me read it. I so love this story, something about Ville as a viking is really hot. To bad they won't make a vid of the story. I think they should.

[bluespire]

To bad they won't make a vid of the story. OMG, if I had a dollar for every time I thought that about someone else's story. :) LOL. How nice of you to say it about mine. :) And thanks for commenting. :) I truly wasn't hinting... really. I am not the comment whore I seem, okay, maybe I am, lol.. Anyway, I appreciate the reading AND the commenting. It keeps me going to know that folks are actually reading this thing. :)

[ctyviray]

Well its time someone said the vid comment about a story of yours. I really think it would be great. Nah not a comment whore, your a writer, and writers never get feedback . Please write more of this soon.

[bluespire]

:) Thanks. I shall try for sooner rather than later. :)

[mildly_neurotic]

Silly Ville. Bam would give you what you had to coerce from Mige. If only he would talk to the boy and actually listen. hehe I look forward to these chapters so very much. Thank you for psting this!!

[bluespire]

Yay. Glad you're still liking. This fic has changed a lot but I'm gonna hang with it and keep trying to post more frequently. :) Thanks lady.

[mildly_neurotic]

Stories do that. Take you places you never expect them too. My current WIP started out as a sleepy little thing about a man and a horse helping each other heal, had a romance for the main character crop up and finally morphed into a bit of a thriller. They get away from you. LOL

I still love yours, enjoy the directions it's lead you and look forward to more!

[meduusje]

ah some violence
just right for my mood...
some though love...
but really ville shouldn't give up on the one good thing he had, his love for bammieboy
thanks for once again a great chapter!

[bluespire]

Lol, little bit of violence, it's true. Glad it worked for your mood. :) Thanks for reading and commenting. :)