Watching Over You - Chapter 16

Apr 11, 2012 19:35

Title: Watching Over You - Chapter 16
Author: Bluespire
Pairing: Ville/Bam, Ville/Mige
Summary: Ville is a Viking warrior, eldest son of Kari, a Viking Jarl. Bam is a slave (called a thrall). What happens when Ville pays Bam's slave price and moves him from the kitchens into his bed?
Rating: This chapter, NC-17
Disclaimer: While Ville, Bam, Mige, ( Read more... )

watching over you, vam

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annushkazhivago April 12 2012, 07:03:51 UTC
Now that would indeed be a nightmare. :O Poor Ville and dream Bam.
Ville and Mige did... *puts hand over mouth* Oh my! So Ville has done it before... But, but it will be different with Bam.
Love this! <3

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bluespire April 13 2012, 03:38:03 UTC
Thanks lady. :) Yes, Ville has a little experience. :) More soon.

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meduusje April 12 2012, 07:28:52 UTC
poor Ville so tormented
and he has no one to blame but himself!

lovely update!!!

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bluespire April 15 2012, 05:14:44 UTC
:) Thanks woman.

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astoria_froggy April 12 2012, 09:31:26 UTC
That nightmare was terrible !
Ville's subconsicous mind is sending him some signals, he needs to make some serious decisions, doesn't he ?
I love your writing :). I was waiting hopefully for this new chapter
More soon please !

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bluespire April 12 2012, 15:13:54 UTC
I know, I'm so slow. I had that writers block and then life suddenly got very busy. But I had a lot of this written from one Saturday morning that I had free so I was able to chip away at it and finally get it done. Glad you're still liking. And the nightmare, IKR? I wrote that before and put it away to work on the rest. When I read it again I even found it disturbing.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

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mildly_neurotic April 12 2012, 16:24:08 UTC
The night mare was frightening and interesting. How will Ville interpret it I wonder. You made me almost feel bad for Migé.

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bluespire April 15 2012, 05:15:59 UTC
Poor Mige. He is used and abused in this fic. And I'm such a fan of the man in RL. :(

Thanks lady. :)

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mildly_neurotic April 15 2012, 07:20:24 UTC
Well sometimes one needs an antagonist and one must throw an otherwise beloved character under the bus to fill that role and advance the plot. Do whatcha gotta do! hehehe

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wineunholy April 12 2012, 18:56:06 UTC
EEP!

I have a LOT of nightmares and
"he looked up at the sky and was surprised to find that it had cleared. The sun was out and it looked to be a beautiful spring day. Where is everyone? "
is ABSOLUTELY terrifying!

Aww I want him to be happy with his Bammy!!

aww cariño! I'll take your fictional Mige and give im some love, he's a big teddy bear and I feel bad for him now LOL he liked it but realizes he's not Bam sadness!

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bluespire April 15 2012, 05:17:27 UTC
Again with the poor Mige. IKR? He gets the raw deal in this one. :(

Yeah, the nightmare turned out good. Kind of surprised myself when I went back to read.

Thank you, sir, for reading and commenting. :)

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wineunholy April 16 2012, 15:24:47 UTC
What can I say! I got a soft spot for cuddly bears like Mige! gotta feel sorry for him! .awwww

It's real good so far! I hope the muses stalk you so you can update again soon!

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