Watching Over You - Chapter 10

[words_lie]

Title: Watching Over You - Chapter 10
Author: Bluespire
Pairing: Ville/Bam, hinting at Ville/Mige and Ville/OC
Summary: Ville is a Viking warrior, eldest son of Kari, a Viking Jarl. Bam is a slave (called a thrall). What happens when Ville pays Bam's slave price and moves him from the kitchens into his bed?
Rating: Will eventually be NC-17

Comments

[melindajane]

Girl, this was so good! And so quick after the last chapter.

The chat with Burton was brilliant (And also sort of sexy with all the face touching going on.) It was a great way to give some insight into both characters without going into a lot of background. Burton might just be my new favorite.

Also, Bam found his balls! I'm excited. And I was even more delighted when you gave just a little stuttering Bam too. The best of both worlds. But I must admit, it's wonderful to see him...hmm, growing up sounds like the wrong phrase. Growing comfortable? I don't know how to say it, but I suspect you know what I'm trying to say.

“Then you must let me fight,” Bam persisted. “I’m late to the training but it’s the only road to honor.” Bam threw Ville’s own words back at him, uttered to Bam in the kitchens one of the first times they spoke.

“Honor. Is that what you desire?”I loved that part. Love all the talk about honor. I think it's essential in a piece like this, which isn't completely about fighting, but let's face it, that's what they

[bluespire]

Thanks lady. I really owe it to you. Our "conversation" was immensely helpful and really got me charged back up for the story. :) Thanks. :)

[meduusje]

awww my lovely burton, sweet as always!!!
and yaya Bam finally said it!!!
wonder what will happen now
hope it doesn't mean the end is coming???
i love this too much to end!!!

[bluespire]

Burton is a sweetie in this. Doesn't he seem like he might really be that way?

hope it doesn't mean the end is coming??? Not yet. They have a ways to go before they'll be okay... which is how I like to leave my characters. Happily-for-the-most-part-ever-after. :)

Glad your still liking. :)

[meduusje]

he really does!!!
i love burty!!!

and yaaaaaaay some more angst before they are happy
love it :)

[astoria_froggy]

I am supposed to get ready to leave in 10 minutes for my 1st indiviual interview with my personal counselling at the job centre.
But I had to read this before when I saw you updated !!!
Yeah you decided to have Burton help Bam !!!!! Thank you :)
And Bam is being so brave. Sometimes you only need a little incentive and there you go !!!
Burton found the right words. Seems he likes Bam :)
Ok, got to go now, one more thing though, please don't let us hang there now ! You can't stop there and let us wait long for the next part.
Please put up the next part very soone.
Thanks for sharing !

[bluespire]

You delayed getting ready for my story? Yippee! That's a serious compliment. I love it when I feel that way about a story. :)

I'll try to update soon. I have part of the next chapter but a really super slammed week through Saturday eve so no promises.

Thanks lady, so glad you are into it. :)

[deepest_dark]

What others have said you are on a roll with this.. Wonderful chapter!
You packed a lot in there.. loved the Burton scene and the whole Ville and Bam chat, watching Bam grow in stature before our eyes, using Burtons words like a mantra was awesome, Go Bam!
So many giddy bits for me in this ;D

[bluespire]

Yay!!! So happy it's still working. I especially like that it had "giddy bits". That is always what I'm going for when finding a fic to read so as a writer, hearing that is a win. Thanks lady. :)

[ma_ca]

Wohoot!

Finally Bam found his balls. And can i say that I am very excited about that? I mean, he dared a lot in just a couple of hours but on the other hand, he's been working for that for some months now.
And Ville acting all concerned about taking Bam to a raid. How cute is that? Is he having second thoughts and to afraid to lose his new favorite person? :3

Go get him, Bam!

[bluespire]

Aww, so glad you're liking and appreciating how it's all turning out. It's nerve wracking for me to write like this, without editing it all to death and planning meticulously before I post. Half the time the story is asking me by surprise. The comments are much appreciated. :)