Title: Watching Over You - Chapter 9
Author: Bluespire
Pairing: Ville/Bam, hinting at Ville/Mige and Ville/OC
Summary: Ville is a Viking warrior, eldest son of Kari, a Viking Jarl. Bam is a slave (called a thrall). What happens when Ville pays Bam's slave price and moves him from the kitchens into his bed?
Rating: Will eventually be NC-17
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before you get yourself into trouble !!!
great chapter once again!!!
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Thanks for reading and commenting lady. :)
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I love your descriptions of Ville, you know that. "Undress me" and then the massage !!!
I love the pace here, how Bam is nervous and then gets confident.
Ville is trying to provoke some reaction of Bam. Bam needs to trust himself, Ville is sending him so many signs !!!
But a master and his thrall ....
Are you going to help them ???
I really loved this part :)
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Very lovely!
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First of all, stuttering Bam. Do I even need to mention this? For some reason I have such an unbelievable crush on this.
Second of all, Ville. His back and forth is fabulous.
“You will do as I please, as I command.”
Bam could feel his breath becoming unsteady and shallow in his chest but he forced words from his throat. “Yes, sir. I will.”
“But Bam,” Ville reached forward and cupped Bam’s chin, turning his eyes upward so that Ville could meet them. “You must know, there are things that I would never force from you.”
So, so fabulous! And even better later, “You must do as I tell you,” Ville snapped.
Bam totally complicates things for him and I love that! It's the perfect kind of love story, at least for me. :)
Can't wait to read more!
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I'm super glad my new chapter was good enough to make you act irresponsibly. :) I mean... okay, you know what I mean. :)
Bam totally complicates things for him Yes, that's it exactly. Ville can have his way but he wants more than that. Unfortunately, the object of his affection is not in the position to meet him there, for a variety of reasons. It's a tangle. Glad you are enjoying the ride, chica.
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