Watching Over You - Chapter 9

Feb 06, 2012 23:36

Title: Watching Over You - Chapter 9
Author: Bluespire
Pairing: Ville/Bam, hinting at Ville/Mige and Ville/OC
Summary: Ville is a Viking warrior, eldest son of Kari, a Viking Jarl. Bam is a slave (called a thrall). What happens when Ville pays Bam's slave price and moves him from the kitchens into his bed?
Rating: Will eventually be NC-17
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watching over you, vam

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meduusje February 7 2012, 09:22:52 UTC
bammie bammie, you should just be honest with your master
before you get yourself into trouble !!!
great chapter once again!!!

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bluespire February 8 2012, 00:10:10 UTC
IKR? It's gonna be that thing where if they just SPOKE to each other, there'd be no story...just smut. LOL. But you know, they have a pretty yawning social class gap to cross so...

Thanks for reading and commenting lady. :)

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astoria_froggy February 7 2012, 10:07:17 UTC
That was as good as smut itself.
I love your descriptions of Ville, you know that. "Undress me" and then the massage !!!
I love the pace here, how Bam is nervous and then gets confident.
Ville is trying to provoke some reaction of Bam. Bam needs to trust himself, Ville is sending him so many signs !!!
But a master and his thrall ....
Are you going to help them ???
I really loved this part :)

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bluespire February 8 2012, 00:15:51 UTC
Are you going to help them ??? Girl! I so want to but I don't know how to make it right. Lol. If I don't then who does, right? I'm really gonna try and I now I'll work it out eventually. They need something to shake them up. I'll figure it out. :) Thanks for reading and commenting lady. :)

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bluespire February 8 2012, 00:16:07 UTC
Totes. Thanks, woman. :)

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deepest_dark February 7 2012, 17:29:48 UTC
Oh wow what a great chapter, i love the ebb and flow you have going between them.
Very lovely!

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bluespire February 8 2012, 00:20:17 UTC
Thank you. :) Yeah, Ville wants to do it right but his inner-master rears his ugly head. :) Thanks for reading and commenting. :) Glad you're still liking. :)

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melindajane February 7 2012, 21:23:04 UTC
Oh my! The amount that I love this is seriously unhealthy. Like, right now I should be in the shower and doing responsible adult things, but instead I'm stealing time away from actual life to read about Vikings!

First of all, stuttering Bam. Do I even need to mention this? For some reason I have such an unbelievable crush on this.

Second of all, Ville. His back and forth is fabulous.

“You will do as I please, as I command.”

Bam could feel his breath becoming unsteady and shallow in his chest but he forced words from his throat. “Yes, sir. I will.”

“But Bam,” Ville reached forward and cupped Bam’s chin, turning his eyes upward so that Ville could meet them. “You must know, there are things that I would never force from you.”

So, so fabulous! And even better later, “You must do as I tell you,” Ville snapped.

Bam totally complicates things for him and I love that! It's the perfect kind of love story, at least for me. :)

Can't wait to read more!

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bluespire February 8 2012, 00:26:10 UTC
Doing adult things in the shower... um, *squeezes legs together* are you flirting with me girl? ;P Ha, just joking.

I'm super glad my new chapter was good enough to make you act irresponsibly. :) I mean... okay, you know what I mean. :)

Bam totally complicates things for him Yes, that's it exactly. Ville can have his way but he wants more than that. Unfortunately, the object of his affection is not in the position to meet him there, for a variety of reasons. It's a tangle. Glad you are enjoying the ride, chica.

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