Yay a new section. And see, I remembered to review this time.
There's a lot I like in this chapter, but I have two favorite bits. One is River interacting with Sheppard Book, as it is very cute and fits both of them. The other is Wash's reaction to the inventory and his conversation with Kaylee. I have a soft spot for Wash, and that scene works well, from the inclusion of the dinos on the inventory to his comforting Kaylee.
Oh, I like (yet again). Especially Wash adding the dinosaurs to the inventory...but I like the not-so-amusing bits, too. The crew are real people here, just like on the show, and that's what makes them so gorram lovable! :)
Hee! Some amusing parts here. Most definitely Mal's twitchiness considering how Zoe is watching him and how noisy Jayne is being. I had a bit of a chuckle to myself through that whole section.
BTW, I have to congratulate you on how well you've nailed Kaylee's voice. You've got the quirks to the way she says things down perfectly. I can hear her in my head clear as if I was watching an episode on TV. Kudos to you for a great job.
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i feel kinda bad for Mal, but mostly, id just like to kick him for being as ass to everyone else. *sigh*
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There's a lot I like in this chapter, but I have two favorite bits. One is River interacting with Sheppard Book, as it is very cute and fits both of them. The other is Wash's reaction to the inventory and his conversation with Kaylee. I have a soft spot for Wash, and that scene works well, from the inclusion of the dinos on the inventory to his comforting Kaylee.
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BTW, I have to congratulate you on how well you've nailed Kaylee's voice. You've got the quirks to the way she says things down perfectly. I can hear her in my head clear as if I was watching an episode on TV. Kudos to you for a great job.
Bring on Part 5! :)
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