Watchmen: Nelly, Adrian, HJ/Nelly, PG-13

Jul 08, 2012 20:15

Title: Not Gonna Watch The World Burn
Fandom: Watchmen
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character: Nelly, Adrian, Eddie, background HJ/Nelly
Warnings: violence, character death
Summary: This was his way out; it was over. That night, Nelson Gardner crashed and burned.
Notes: Written for this prompt at the Watchmen kink meme.

Not Gonna Watch The World Burn )

character: nelly, fandom: watchmen, pairing: hj/nelly, character: adrian veidt

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anactoria July 9 2012, 07:08:02 UTC
Oh, I like how you've woven this in to fit canon; it feels very plausible. I'm not normally a big fan of Nelly, but you've made me feel for him here.

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rocks_not_dead July 9 2012, 20:39:10 UTC
Thank you. :) I always love hearing that my writing has had impact on the reader. I'm glad you like it.

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lanculus July 9 2012, 07:44:07 UTC
Ooh, this is really cool. I love Nelson's strength and resilience (even if it's also really sad), and the idea of Adrian almost looking up to him, but most of all I like the way you reinforced the way that things got so much more serious during the Crimebusters era - the way that the new masks surpassed the old. I think you wrote that very, very well.

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rocks_not_dead July 9 2012, 20:43:56 UTC
Thank you. I find it absolutely fascinating the way it all evolved and especially like focusing on how the first generation deals with the changes. Because, it does become a darker world on a much larger scale and very definitely coincides with Adrian's descent.

And Nelly, well. Breaks my heart most of the time. :( I have to admit I do keep my happy headcanon alive that he's not dead and HJ isn't dead and all, but unless it's a fixit I tend to go with the more realistic angsty one.

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lanculus July 9 2012, 20:56:02 UTC
Yeah, I like to think they both survived and live a happy and disquietingly domestic, sickeningly romantic life together, but fic like yours tends to be more realistic (and consequently better).

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