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xrated13 March 17 2006, 14:53:01 UTC
Oh wow. I love the subtle affection between Lupin and Snape. :) That was a really nice ending and I'm glad that Snape never went out of character. I still think that Draco is useless, in his great bratty way. I like Tonks, she is bearable and silly, the 'hemlock' lecture from Snape to Tonks was hilarious and well, great! Lupin is my fav character here, so oblivious that Snape may actually like him. :) Hehehehe, those 8 chapters have been an exciting and evil ride. Awesome story! :) You're great.

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wordplaywright March 17 2006, 20:10:33 UTC
Thanks :) I'm so happy that you liked Lupin. He was almost as difficult to write as Lucius. I had to rewrite he Infirmary scene five times; it's a part where Lupin should be confused and, well, freaked out (because of the rape), but he wouldn't have been IC if I allowed him to show too much emotion.

And I think he wouldn't be so great if he wasn't difficult to write :)

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