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xtinethepirate August 21 2008, 12:56:47 UTC
Your basic, boy meets girl, boy loves brother, boy can't have brother so he takes the next best thing ahhhh, I love those good old fashioned romance cliches. Wait. *snickers*

Will watch this one as soon as Im not, yanno, at work and stuff. Though really, Madame, HET? As the MAIN THEME? What are you trying to DO to me here??

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wordplay__ August 21 2008, 13:42:12 UTC
Old fashioned romance cliches, as this so obviously is, are what makes the world go round.

*shameface*

I don't know! *makes wavy hands* They just... THEY LOOK PRETTY TOGETHER, OKAY?

I think I've lost my slash inspiration. Or at least misplaced it.

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xtinethepirate August 21 2008, 16:53:49 UTC
ARGH! It doesn't wanna load all the way for me, stupid work internets. But what I have seen of it is BRILLIANT, darling. I love how you make the Dean/Jess encounter in the pilot seem like they're making eyes at each other, but just not saying anything in front of Sam. The opening scene that comes before the "two weeks earlier" is also very well put together. Who is it she's really kissing? Because dude, it so looks like Dean.

You're so very smart with your vidding-fu, you know that? :D

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xtinethepirate August 21 2008, 16:55:38 UTC
ALSO.

Tove: *saunters in with Jude slung over his shoulder, grinning cheekily* Someone misplace their slash inspiration?

Jude: *beats at Tove's back with his fists, struggling* Put me DOWN, you great lummox!!

Tove: *smacks Jude's ass playfully* Where do you want us? *fangy grin* I? Fucking guarantee slash interest returns.

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shadow_of_doubt August 21 2008, 15:47:37 UTC
That is amazing!!

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wordplay__ August 21 2008, 23:55:26 UTC
Thank you, Becky! :D

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geeky_ginger August 21 2008, 17:13:34 UTC
That was so good...broke my heart for Dean! Very nice editng! :-)

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wordplay__ August 21 2008, 23:56:19 UTC
Boy really can't catch a break, can he? Also, thanks for watching and commenting, glad you enjoyed it enough to do so :D

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wordplay__ August 22 2008, 01:29:34 UTC
Thank you! Definitely good to hear you liked it :)

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xtinethepirate August 22 2008, 01:31:52 UTC
ARGH LJ ATE MY POST AND I HATES IT!!!!!!! *WOES*

The upshot of my comment was that my mommy watched this over my shoulder and she thought it was (and you are) absolutely AMAZING AND TALENTED. (well, not that IT was talented, but that you are. *winks*) The way you cut the scenes to make it into Dean and Jo making out and Sam walking in on them together.... that takes some mad skillz, my dear, and you more than came through with it. I was utterly convinced. :D OH DEAN AT THE END. *STABBITY IN HEART*

So, just so I'm getting everything straight, the first 30 seconds with her coming to the hotel room and her and Dean ttly doing it happen after she's married to Sam?? And Dean leaves her in tears because he wants to bang be fair to Sammy? *wibbley a bit*

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wordplay__ August 22 2008, 01:46:58 UTC
The way you cut the scenes to make it into Dean and Jo making out and Sam walking in on them together

EEWWWWW, XTINE! *eyes bleed* TAKE EET BACK!

*closes eyes*

*high fives you*

*misses 'cause my eyes were totally closed cause of your HORRIBLE IMAGES*

Woot! That's it exactly! SO glad you caught on to that. I threw that note about it happening after the end in hopes that it would be less confusey. She still came to Dean in the end [after, y'know, Dean huffs off at the engagement dinner], but Dean realized that they couldn't keep it up after everything that had happened, so he does the right thing and leaves. Silly boy.

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xtinethepirate August 22 2008, 01:53:30 UTC
ARGH. I typed Dean and Jo in my FIRST comment, then went back and fixed it to be Jess. Apparently I made the same mistake this time around and then forgot to change it. BECAUSE DOOOD. *JOINS YOU IN CLOSING EYES. ENDS UP SMACKING YOU IN THE NOSE* SORRY!!!!!

And Dean Dean Dean Dean. You are not meant to be the noble one. So stay and have the sex and then let her go home to your baby brother who you can then fantasize about. See? EVERYONE WINS IN THAT SCENARIO.

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wordplay__ August 22 2008, 01:48:04 UTC
Also, your momma is clearly made of WIN \o/

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