[fic] Second Chance - Chapter 9

Aug 27, 2010 05:09

Title: Second Chance - Chapter 9
Pairing: Akame
Rating: PG-13
Summary:  sequel to the tragic sequel of Anything For You. Fifty years later, Kazuya and Jin are reincarnated in their namesakes: their friends' grandchildren. Can their second chance turn out for the better? Can they be happy and together this time?

Chapter 9 )

fic: second chance, ongoing, multi-chapter

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wordmelodies August 28 2010, 00:59:13 UTC
lol, yeah, usually that's true; the kids know that they can get a reaction by asking why, even if it's just answers they don't understand, and they get attention, so they just keep doing it. It's like a game eventually XDDD

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insecure282 August 27 2010, 12:21:50 UTC
*dies from an overload of chibi Kame's cuteness*
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*revives to comment on this wonderful chapter*

Chibi Kame is so CUTE! Gah, why can't my nephew's be that cute? I want chibi Kame to be my nephew!

*snaps out of fangirl rant*

Definitely one of my favourite chapters in this series. Even cuter than some, if not most of the drabbles. I love how you brought out Kame's stubbornness with this 'why?' stage. Poor Tat-chan... And Junno too, but mostly Tat-chan. Jin's reaction is so EPIC, almost as awesome as Ryo's, but Ryo just rocks that way. This is the first time I'm mentioning it, but you've totally inspired my love for RyoKame. They are officially my third OTP after Akame and RyoDa.

Okay, I'm gonna stop before I become completely incoherent. I think I shall just start reading all over again from the one-shot now.

Loved this! Hope to see another update (on any fic) soon!

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wordmelodies August 28 2010, 01:01:27 UTC
Ooh, what you said about ryokame made me smile~ I'm glad it's become one of your favourite pairings <333 (I don't feel guilty about inspiring it at all lol =P); it's my favourite pairing so :DDDD

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wintersdancer August 27 2010, 12:42:18 UTC
Wow, I've just read the whole thing until now and completely loved it! I loved thia chapter, with all the questions and Jin's answering as if it is a very usual thing XD And Ryo self-congratulating because he managed to make Kame sleep XD
I love it!

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wordmelodies August 28 2010, 01:07:41 UTC
<3 I'm glad you enjoyed the entire fic~~ :D

Haha, well, to me, it seems as though Ryo would see it as an accomplishment that he had managed to get Kame to sleep when Pi, Ueda and Junno all coudln't XDDD I can totally imagine him being all accomplished and triumphant feeling XD

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jennishi August 27 2010, 14:15:56 UTC
Ryo is the greatest! I love how he teased Pi! I love Jin's patience for Kame!

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wordmelodies August 28 2010, 01:09:23 UTC
haha, Ryo's definitely amusing to write :D if only because he has no mercy for anyone else XDDD i'm not quite sure if it's patience, or just the fact that as a child the same age, he just doesn't get annoyed about that sort of thing as easily as an adult would

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sumomo_yuki August 27 2010, 15:22:32 UTC
i would go mad and like leave the child in the room alone, WITH THE DOOR WIDE OPEN SO I CAN SEE, tho ... I was never the child to ask why alot XD SO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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wordmelodies August 28 2010, 01:11:16 UTC
LOL, i guess it's cute if you aren't the one facing him? XDDDD

I don't think I was ever the type of child to do that either, but I've met children who have, and haha, you usually have to distract them XDD but sometimes, they're not so easily distracted, like Kame XDDD

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sumomo_yuki August 28 2010, 15:06:46 UTC
Yeah... I still will think it's cute but God can it be annoying or what? I had a cousin like that once... I mean like the kid grew older then it was okay, it took forever for us to get her to stop... lol even then she'd go w~ and we'd like one more time and no ice cream. She'd clamp up immediately.

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wordmelodies August 30 2010, 04:51:21 UTC
lol, that's usually the best way to deal with the annoying 'why' stage XDDD kids never want to miss out on ice cream...when it comes to sugar vs. being annoying, sugar usually wins XDDD

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