Snap, by somthng__wicked, Rated PG-13

[somthng__wicked]

Title: Snap
Author: somthng__wicked
Rating: PG-13
Fandom and Pairing: CSI, Greg Sanders/David Hodges
Claim and Prompt: 'Need', First Time. My table (with my two whole completed stories) can be found here.
Warnings: None, just some swearing.
Notes: This takes place about four months after the lab explosion. Sometime early in season four. Special thanks

Comments

[somthng__wicked]

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[elmyraemilie]

See, this is the Hodges I see this season. He's not a generic know-it-all ass because that's what he *is*; he's that way because it gets him what he wants. Peace, quiet, and left the hell alone. But now? Now he wants Greg to feel better and let it go, and he's going to do what he can to help that happen. In a snarky, sarcastic way, of course. Wunnaful.

[somthng__wicked]

Thanks! Yeah, I figured David's approach to this sort of situation would be different than what a typical person who considered themselves your friend would do. And really, no one is better at provoking a response from Greg than he is.

<3!

[yo_helena]

First of all, your icon rocks. Oh yes. You make Greg+David effortless in writing, and then you add pretty graphics to the mix. You have me hooked. ^_^

Okay, on with the story! I was so excited to see something new from you! (I did the Dance of Happyhappylovejoy in my desk chair. I do that for only very special fics. ^_-) The way you began it was great: quick, snappy, just like David himself. But I feel so sorry for Greg; his back's killing him and he still tries to stay so strong. *sighs* We all know how that is sometimes (being sick or hurt and not being able to express it) but for Greg it's more permanant and that makes it all the worse.

You make the emotion very clear, especially when he blows up at Jacqui. That's a powerful image- they're friends, y'know? (I hope she understand that he's just trying to deal right now.) Not only that, but you write his anger so well. (I'd show my favorite parts, but then I'd be copying and pasting the entire thing!) This part particularly: "How about we blow you up... nearly kill you... scar

Re: <3!

[somthng__wicked]

*is once again in awe at your feedback* Wow... I just told my friend I think I'm gonna have to widen the doors in my house to make room for my ego after reading that. *winks*

I appreciate you liking the icon because it took me FOREVER to make... was one of those ones I just couldn't get to look right now matter how hard I tried. I'm pretty happy with how it turned out in the end.

I'm flattered that you were so happy to see something I'd written! Here's hoping I don't disappoint you in the future! LOL

You make the emotion very clear. Thanks, I was trying really hard to convey how Greg was feeling not just through his thoughts (which are painfully obvious) but also through more subtle things like his body language. He's been through hell, and anger is definitely a very real part of dealing with a traumatic event. Anger and irritation that you can't make sense out of, let alone control, and that's what I was trying to get across here. People tend to focus on depression and withdrawal as a side effect (which are just as real

[carolina30363]

Awwwwwwww... I love your David!

[somthng__wicked]

Thanks for the feeback! Glad you enjoyed it!

[emony2]

Aw, I love Hodges... making Greg feel better by snark... so sweet :)

Em

[somthng__wicked]

It's what he does best after all! ;)

Thanks for the feeback!