Sparrer in crime [PG; Urahara/Yoruichi]

[worblehat]

Title: Sparrer in crime
By: worblehat
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Urahara/Yoruichi
Rating: PG
Summary: The beginnings of a long-lasting friendship formed through violence.
Notes: Not really a pairing-based fic. It's got hints, if you're looking for those.
Word Count: 1,057

Comments

[prpl_pen]

afjkdbhfasjkf ahhhh, I loved this a LOT. You haven't even caught up on Bleach yet, have you? SOme of the more recent chapters have me seeing their relationship in a slightly different light. THIS WORKS WITHIN THAT, THOUGH. So I have to assume you are just psychic. Or...maybe you have read those chapters, I dunno. >.>

Anyway~ I love these two together; I love their platonic relationship AND I love them together as a pair (which might seem odd considering I love YoruSoi so much, but I've always seen Yoruichi as a pimp who gets around; Soi is the jealous/possessive one), and I think you really struck the right balance between those two aspects here.

I adored this bit:
"I think one day you're going to make something you'll wish you could un-make," she explained.

Urahara considered the ground in front of him with hooded eyes. "What would you do if I did?"

The silence that followed made him look up, eyes widening when he felt her head land softly on his shoulder. She sighed.

"Follow you, stupid."
Ahhh... So good, Bri. So so GOOD.

[worblehat]

Nope, I'm still pretty behind - and watching OP means I'll be behind for a while. Er. Hahhaa, really? That's awesome! I'm not psychic - actually, this is only the second time this has happened to me, with fic or RPing, where something I randomly said I read up later to totally fit in. I like to pretend this makes me good at characterisation. Anything to boost my ego, you know?

I like them platonic and a little bit as a pair [ahahahha, I know what you mean]. So I tried to include both aspects without leaning too heavily on either one.

I'm glad you liked that part! :D

Thanks, Jessie! Means a lot that you read this one. ♥

[ravenpirate]

I finally remembered to read thiiiis. ♥

"I think one day you're going to make something you'll wish you could un-make," she explained.

Ahaha. I WONDER WHAT IT WILL BE????

I like it when guys are perverts. It makes me laugh so hard. I don't even care about the good guys and this fic made me miss Yoruichi and Urahara.

How do you manage to keep stuff short and sweet? I have tl;dr syndrome. :/

[worblehat]

I finally remembered to comment. ALSNFLDSNFKDS. ♥

ME TOO. :||

Hahhahaha, do you really? For some reason, I thought you didn't like that kind of stuff! Hahaha, awww.

I...dunno? I like just writing scenes sometimes? I LIKE YOUR TL;DR SYNDROME. You should write something. :||||||

iluuuu.