You captured their personalities perfectly! Isshin can be sort of annoying but he knows when he should quit being an idiot, especially when around Ryuuken. Great work!
^OMG, that's so funny, I can picture him saying that, and yet I can't. I still love it thou. ^^
Aw, this was so nice!! I love how you did Ryuu's personality, willing, and still bitterly sarcastic, just like he's supposed to be. Awesome work! Very sweet, and I loved all of their lines. Sho cuuute... Great work, I really enjoyed this!! ^^
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Will probably cross-post in a bit. Thanks for reading!
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Plz plzzz to be posting this at isshiken? ^__^b
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Done and done.
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^OMG, that's so funny, I can picture him saying that, and yet I can't. I still love it thou. ^^
Aw, this was so nice!! I love how you did Ryuu's personality, willing, and still bitterly sarcastic, just like he's supposed to be. Awesome work! Very sweet, and I loved all of their lines. Sho cuuute... Great work, I really enjoyed this!! ^^
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Thanks for the awesome feedback, glad my characterisation was decent. And thanks for reading, obviously. :)
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I still like ByaUra better, but this is very nice too. ;D
Ryuuken's last line is also so very endearing. :D
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Hahah, violence is endearing. And um. Sweet? Maybe. :P
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