Cracked Reception [R; Eiji/Momo]

Mar 07, 2007 01:09

Title: Cracked Reception (2/2)
Author: worblehat
Genre: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Eiji/Momo
Rating: R
Notes: Written for prillalar as part of the santa_smex exchange. Beta'd by regulusa. I pretty much fail at archiving in a timely manner. Sorry?
Summary: Eiji's summer is not what he expects.
Word Count: ~12,000

Part II )

long, pot, adult

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eliminate March 7 2007, 23:11:43 UTC
Sakklsfslkjgafkl. Omg, thank you so much for posting this! I wasn't around much during the initial postings and kicked myself when I saw this wasn't up, but I've read it, and omg just. ♥♥♥ I'm an awful commenter, but I really love all of your fics, even the pairings I don't usually read, so thank you so much for posting this!

“ME T - yeah right, my mom's not going to believe that,” says Momo in a normal tone of voice, pulling the covers over his torso.

When Momo's mother walks in, Eiji introduces himself with a red face and the urge to run for a very, very, very long time.

That = one of the best couple lines ever. :D

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worblehat March 8 2007, 06:25:27 UTC
Not a problem! I'm glad I saw your comment, it was a good reminder to post it to my journal here. I'm also glad you enjoyed reading it! And what a nice thing to say, about the fics in general.

Hah.

This feedback was really nice to come home to, thanks again! :)

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yoshikochan April 26 2007, 14:37:28 UTC
YAY! Okay I know I've never commented before ^^; but Numi-dono recommended your fics to me and I read the FujiEijiRyo<3<3<3 ones a while ago and wanted to read this one XD and finally its archived, YAY!! MomoEiji<3 All the beautiful unexplored sort-of canon pairings<3<3<3 Thank you sooo much. =3

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worblehat April 26 2007, 19:20:10 UTC
Aww, did she? I'll have to thank her later, that's really sweet of her to do! I'm happy you enjoyed this and the other one you mentioned. Thanks for this comment, I really appreciate it! :)

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seregil_1982 August 22 2007, 21:03:26 UTC
omg, what an incredible wonderful story! it was so intense and beautiful that you reduced me to tears a few times (though listening to Tom Waits during reading didn't help either). i don't really know what to tell you other than that i absolutely love this piece of fiction. i've just only recently stumbled into this fandom but i can say that this is the best story i've read so far (and believe me, i've read a lot already)! simply amazing! *hugs and applauds author*

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worblehat August 26 2007, 05:08:07 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sorry about the tears, haha. This fandom has some good stuff around, though I'm not so good at finding it all. Anyway, thanks for reading. And for friending! ♥

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slashyme May 31 2009, 23:28:57 UTC
I really didn't think this pairing would work. But I love the way the relationship develops, and I love the fact that you didn't forget about Oishi. And I reeeeally like the ending.

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worblehat June 1 2009, 16:45:54 UTC
To be honest, neither did I when I wrote it! Then it just sort of... wrote itself. I'm really happy that you liked the development, and the fic overall! The ending was cheesy but that's kind of one of my favourite ways to end things.

Thanks so much for this review! ♥

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