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worblehat

Melting [R; Ryuuken/Uryuu]

Jan 25, 2007 22:25

Title: Melting
Author: worblehat
Genre: Bleach
Pairing: Ryuuken/Uryuu
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite owns this.
Notes: Written a while back for illuminations. Um, incest? Possible spoilers? Might be AU, I have no idea. Self-beta'd.
Word Count: 934

( Melting )

bleach, adult, short

Comments 16

ayisse April 20 2007, 15:59:51 UTC

Uryuu wants and Ryuuken waits and time strains their interactions.

I really like this line!!
You write really well, and I love how the story moves on fluidly. (And the fact that they are not so certain, nervous, about what they're doing and how it's all so silent) This is really one for the books ^^p

worblehat May 8 2007, 02:56:28 UTC

Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed this and that line in particular - I feel more secure in dialogue than description so it's nice when someone points out the latter! :)