Fic: Memories as a Teacup: Chapter 10

[wook77]

Title: Memories as a Teacup: Chapter 10
Author: wook77
Pairing:: Dean/Seamus (other slash and het pairings contained within)
Rating: PG (Eventual rating: Hard R to NC-17)
100quills prompt: 29. Disease
Warnings: Canon compliant through DH. Pre-Epilogue. Additional Warnings at the beginning of Chapter 1.
Wordcount: Overall: ~70k This part: 4200
Summary:

Comments

[writersblock76]

I was very, very excited to see that you'd updated. I love that Seamus is still a little out of his mind, and that he lost control with Lestrange. His insistence with Dean about Dean's mum was very nice...it's good to seen Dean getting a little riled up. I also loved that we got to see a little of Harry and Ron this chapter, and particularly enjoyed their reaction to Seamus's comment about Dean having dinner ready. Can't wait to read more!

[wook77]

Hee! I'm extremely happy that you feel that way! It's definitely about time Dean starts losing his temper with the situation. When I started writing this, I did tonnes of research into the way that amnesiacs react to the world around them so I did my best to incorporate the research. One of the main things the sites I found said is that they'll just suddenly start snapping at the situation and the people around them.

♥ Thank you so much for your comments!

[oconel]

I love how Seamus is able to stand for what he believes in front of Dean. It shows how confident he is on their friendship (or how he's forgotten that's not the old Dean).

Anyway, great chapter. I think the scene at Azkaban works (was it previously earlier on the fic?), and I like that Seamus isn't exactly proud of it.

<3<3

[wook77]

:D Seamus is finally starting to go back to his old self here, be a bit more forceful and emphatic instead of giving everything and being so afraid to rock the boat :D.

It was previously written but not planned for the place I had it. One of the reasons this is going out weekly is that i work ahead so much and then have to "fill in the blanks". So I have a couple of spots that I still need to do that.

♥ you so much :D

[oconel]

Oh, I thought I had read it, but I was sure I hadn't read other parts of this, so I was a bit confused O_o

This is a great fic!!!

[katmarajade]

Well, Seamus had to get that simmering anger out somehow I guess… though this may not have been the best way. Then again… *shrugs* And I really love your Ron Weasley comic relief. Seamus beats a Death Eater prisoner to a bloody pulpy mess and Ron’s all, yeah, uh huh, whatev… "Oi! We got a clean up in here!" LOL!

Parvati chose such a perfect memory to give Dean! That scene always makes me smile and I like the little tidbits you added to fill it out. And, of course, the angsty fighting scene to end! I remember being all noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! when this first went up! Ah, the mark of greatness. I love this! <3<3<3