Fic: Life and What Happens When

[wook77]

Title: Life and What Happens When
Author: wook77
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Dean/Parvati, Seamus/Lavender, Other
Wordcount:~2250
Rating: Minor R (More PG-13 but R to be safe)
Warnings: Changing POV dependent on section.
Summary: A lesson in life and what happens when...
Author's Notes: Written for chaeldub for his birthday (I'm sorry that this is late).

Comments

[chaeldub]

*points at Icon*

Seriously, I do. This is just... *searches for superlatives*

The bruises... guh

Firstly, Damien Rice ♥'s and that song choice is just perfect (I think I've listened to that before and thought to myself there's a story in there and obviously there was but I was to naff to write it!)

On his hip, those four little dots... guh

The thoughts that separate each POV change are sweaty brow/sheet clutchingly good. Each one left a lump... in my throat *grin* The ambiguousness of each one - it doesn't matter whose each one is aseach is thinking it, wanting to say it.Did I mention Seamus magicking away the bruises? Cause if I didn't, well, seriously that image of him tracing his fingertips up his torso *dies

[wook77]

How the hell did I not respond to this? Seriously? Am I just this big of a twunt? What the shit, wook, what the shitty shit?

Ok so first, forgive me for being a twunt and not responding to your comment. Plz?

Second - omg. So so so happy that you liked this because I wibbled about all the het all over the place in this. I didn't want it to be too much but oh man :D so glad you enjoyed.

Lav is the bit that made me the saddest. The way that she just simply had no clue and this entire thing just about crushed her.

And that line you pointed out? That was the only line I knew I had to include. From there - the rest of the story grew.

*loves*

[kaalee]

I emailed this to myself to read if I got a moment during the day today and, *gasp* I actually had a few minutes when the kids were at lunch. :)

I thought the way you led into this was really awesome -- the Seamus/Dean OTP'er in me wondered if Dean was cheating on her with Seamus, but initially that was just because I want them together all the time, and not because it was there. I thought it was quite well done the way you gave little images, little hints all through it, but didn't spell it out until much later in the story.

God, and Parvati's letter at the end? Totally killed me. What a letter. I can only just imagine. *shudder*

There was one small thing that I noticed, but I think it's more a stylistic choice, like preference. I'll email you.

[wook77]

eek, so I'm so totally horrible for not responding to this earlier. GAH, all aboard the wook failboat! Boarding now, room for 1!

I really had this perfect image of the two of them sneaking around and it's all furtive so that's why they're the small blips - I wanted the blips to convey a feeling of furtiveness.

And what was it that you were going to email me?

*loves*

[shygryf]

oh that was sad and sweet and i really liked it.

[wook77]

I fail at responding. :(

I'm very glad that you liked this story. Sad and sweet is really what I do best, methinks. I'm not so good with the happy endings.

[shygryf]

eh i fail at reviewing so we are a matched pair!

[secretsolitaire]

Ouch. I felt so badly for Parvati and Lavender, but I was seduced by the intensity of the stolen moments between Dean and Seamus. *aches*

[wook77]

ACK, another one! Now I beg your forgiveness TWICE.

I'm very glad that you enjoyed the intensity there. I was trying for that and this feeling of furtiveness making the intensity grow bigger and bigger.

Lavender breaks my heart as she just had no clue. I'm not sure how I'd want it to end which is one of the reasons I left it where it was. I want them to be happy but how all of them would be happy with the dynamics, I've not a clue.

[fitzette]

*passes out entirely*

Oh, I love how everything all wove together. Poor Lavender and Parvati. I'm conflicted, which I think means you got this just about right.

[wook77]

First - OMG YOUR ICON OMG!

I'm totally conflicted and I wrote it :D. There are so many different victims and no one is really to blame and not to blame and.... yeah.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

[fitzette]

wheee!!! yaaronet owns my soul!