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Victims of Love (Merlin Fanfic)

Feb 11, 2010 23:02

Title: Victims Of Love
Rating: M
Warnings/Spoilers: None.
Summary: Love and lust are uncontrollable emotions that can stand the test of time. The only problem is that Merlin and Arthur don't remember each other. Arthur and Gwen are dating but when things happen that cause Arthur and Merlin to be drawn together things start to crumble and Merlin ( Read more... )

fandom: merlin, ship: merthur, fic

Comments 23

adeina_rhyddha February 12 2010, 19:53:18 UTC

"It was really wonderful?"
WTF, DUDE. YOU KNOW THAT IS WAS.
IT WAS AWESOME ANDANDAND AWESOME WITH LITTLE ADDED BITS OF AWESOME. AND MAYBE AWESOME SPRINKLES OR SOMETHING, IDEK.
THIS WAS GREAT. LIKE, REALLY GREAT. SRSLY.
ANDANDAND GWEN. I KIND OF FEEL SORRY FOR HER BUT WHATEVER, BECAUSE BOYS. OH, BOYS.
I LOVED THE VISIONS WHEN THEY TOUCHED - THAT WAS A GREAT IDEA. AND HOW INEVITABLE IT ALL WAS AND HOW EVEN GWEN REALISED IT.
ANYWAYS, I THINK THIS IS ENOUGH INANE DRABBLE FROM ME. I SHALL GO WORK ON MY OWN FIC NAO, M'KAY? x3

woodsgal February 12 2010, 19:58:16 UTC

XD NO I DON'T KNOW IF IT'S REALLY WONDERFUL ENOUGH, I AM WAITING FOR LOTS OF COMMENTS TO TELL ME IT'S WONDERFUL.

POOR GWEN, DON'T JUST WHATEVER HER SHE WAS LOVELY AND ACCEPTING =P. THE BOY'S ARE WONDERFUL THOUGH, JUST VERY SILLY.

XD I HARDLY SEE THAT AS A GREAT ORIGINAL IDEA, I'M NOT VERY GOOD AT THEM. I'VE READ IT SOMEWHERE BEFORE...MAYBE IN ANOTHER FANDOM BUT STILL.

YES, GO WORK ON YOUR OWN FIC NOW SO I CAN READ THAT.

adeina_rhyddha February 12 2010, 20:01:00 UTC

WELL I AM TELLING YOU THAT IT IS WONDERFUL AS AND YOU WELL KNOW I AM ALWAYS RIGHT, EVEN WHEN I AM WRONG. KTHNXBAI.
WHATEVER, THE BOYS ARE MORE LOVELY. WELL, MAYBE NOT LOVELY, BUT THEY ARE...Y'KNOW. MARVELLOUS AND STUFF. EPIC, MAYBE. I DUNNO, I DON'T KNOW GOOD WORDS TO DESCRIBE THEM.
WHATEVER, I LIKED IT. NAO SHUSH UP.
HAHA. IT'S NOT VERY GOOD. PEOPLE WILL OD ON TEH FLUFF, I PROMISE YOU.

mychaostheorem February 18 2010, 21:22:29 UTC

Thank you thank you so so much for posting this at FF!!!! I haven't had proper internet besides on my phone in days and it was killing me but then i got a notification for this and... THANK YOU! My phone scews up on Lj you see... I tried to comment but no. It didn't let me!! (gomenne!)

Sigh ok. I LOVED THIS! My favourite out of everything you've done (which is saying something)... The narration is just awesome (love love love the end!) and ah gwen... you're such a martyr (i just wanna hug her in this!).. I hope Lance comes soon for her!

good luck boys!

woodsgal February 18 2010, 21:27:28 UTC

XD really? FF.net hates my phone now, I have to sign something that proves I'm 18 + to go on it on the Virgin site but it's my Dad's account on Virgin and he wouldn't want me to lie XP.

Yeah, I was trying out a different style of writing so I was really nervous about posting this so I'm glad you liked the style. I might write more in this style.

Gwen is a martyr but Lance will be there for her soon.

Thanks for commenting and oh, what did you think about the lyrics I used?

mychaostheorem February 18 2010, 21:34:10 UTC

oh damn I forgot to mention it but the lyrics were AWESOME! By themselves and in the story! Really added nicely to the structure i reackon! do you usually like those kind of songs?

woodsgal February 18 2010, 21:36:27 UTC

XD they're all great songs...especially the ETF and the Brand New song are amazing. Definitely worth listening to and that's good that they added to the structure.

Yep, I listen to a mix but those were mainly songs from my Emo and Pop-Punk folders.

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woodsgal March 2 2010, 17:40:41 UTC

Really? I don't think it was THAT good...thanks though ^^.

Yes, they were helpless to the past emotions and urges drawing them together...and GOD that sounds LAME ha ha. I made you feel sorry for Gwen when you don't really like her? Whoo and XD I see her being kind enough to let someone she truly loves go and it's not in her point of view so you don't really see how she's taking it inside...which was badly. I don't think Arthur wanted her to know, maybe subconciously because he felt guilty but he was also being a stupid guy ha ha. I didn't really think of it like that before.

I'd have hated it if Merlin had ended up hurt also.

I'm glad you loved it and that the characters weren't OOC. Glad you also commented on the tension as that was something I was trying to portray. Thank you and thanks for commenting.