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wonotice

Okay so the Real World Isn't that Bad

Apr 09, 2011 15:40

Title: Okay so the Real World isn't that Bad
Pairing: Akame
Rating: NC-17 *dies*
Genre: Romance? Smut?
Warning: Um very poorly written smut...
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone mentioned
Summary: Akanishi had suddenly gone cold on Kazuya and Kazuya was sick of it

( Kazuya even started to miss the constant touching and inappropriate gestures. )

s:real world, g: smut, g:romance, p:akame, r:nc-17, l:multichap

Comments 43

kame_kiyumi April 9 2011, 15:11:40 UTC

Cool~ I wish more sequels like this can come up often~ XD

wonotice April 9 2011, 15:15:05 UTC

XD I will never write smut again lol
Thanks for commenting ^_^

aishayue April 9 2011, 15:17:54 UTC

yay!as you promised! this was gooc and loved Matsujun's part XDXDXD

wonotice April 9 2011, 15:23:12 UTC

^_^
Lol Matsujun and Jin together is ♥
Thanks for commenting

yunizhamasaki April 9 2011, 15:32:57 UTC

LOL...i don't mind to read another sequel for this.haha
thanks for the fic

wonotice April 9 2011, 16:00:32 UTC

Lol there'll be one or two more XD
Thanks for commenting ♥

tokutamai April 9 2011, 16:07:20 UTC

hehe, well for 1st time writing smut, I think it's ok. With time and practice (in case you still want to write smut again) I think you can write it. But if you are uncomfortable then you can stop writing smut. Some writers never write smut and their stories still are great ^^

wonotice April 9 2011, 16:10:05 UTC

XD Thanks
As perverted as I am I get so flustered when writing smut XD
Thanks for commenting ^_^

aterjsa April 9 2011, 16:11:53 UTC

HOT!!!

how about another sequel...
a marriage sequel perhaps....
XD....just kidding!

love this!!!
and thank you for making one!

*hugs*

wonotice April 9 2011, 16:15:59 UTC

Lol there will be one or two more ;)
I'm glad you like it ^_^
Thanks for commenting ♥

aterjsa April 9 2011, 16:25:30 UTC

honto ni?!

>______< i'm getting excited!!!

you're welcome!!!