Comments | women_in_kevlar: Come in From the Rain - Crossover Criminal Minds/NCIS NC-17

cherokee62 in women_in_kevlar

Come in From the Rain - Crossover Criminal Minds/NCIS NC-17

Mar 17, 2010 22:55

Summary: J.J. meets a stranger who helps her open up about regrets and missed chances.

Fandom/Pairing: Crossover Criminal Minds/NCIS - J.J./Ziva
Author: Cherokee62
Rating: NC-17 Sexual Situations involving women, basic smut
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 3,794
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, just having some fun with them. They are owned ( Read more... )

fandom: ncis, author: cherokee62, fic, character: jennifer jareau, character: ziva david, fandom: criminal minds

Comments 8

sabosworth March 18 2010, 14:55:57 UTC

Note... Do not read at work !!! This was HOT. I, like Ziva, was expecting talking not doing. Very nicely done. Hope JJ gets a chance to "practice" what she's learned.... Thanks for sharing.

cherokee62 March 19 2010, 04:39:53 UTC

lol..definately not work approved reading! So glad you enjoyed it!

I have been starting to wonder what happens when JJ gets to Emily's apartment..might have to find out...lol

steppenwolf_20 March 19 2010, 19:50:44 UTC

Oh verrrry nice. You really nailed Ziva and her voice! Great job.

And very hot. I like crossovers very much (as you might know) and I often wondered how a meeting of those two might go.

Thanks for sharing!

cherokee62 March 19 2010, 23:41:10 UTC

Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed it.
I have been wanting to write a piece with Ziva but just am not feeling the Ziva/Abbey ship.
I started to do a jj/emily piece but along came Ziva and well...lol

Thanks for reading @ the comment!

liberty_stewart April 21 2010, 08:03:31 UTC

I don't watch NCIS, but I like your portrayal of Ziva. Wasn't a big fan of the JJ portrayal at first, but you left her with potential at the end. So I'll read your second Ziva/JJ fic and lets see how much she has improved.

BTW I noticed you posted your fics on other communities. Just a suggestion, but it might be better to simply provide a link of the fic to your original journal entry. This will save you the trouble of having to copy and paste the whole thing for other communities.

cherokee62 April 21 2010, 08:07:52 UTC

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you like Ziva evn though you don't watch the show.

I'm not sure how you link to other communities, but it sure would be easier then the muti-posting I do now. I'll have to check out finding how its done.
Thanks for the suggestion.

liberty_stewart April 21 2010, 19:08:32 UTC

If you want to post a link to your journal, that's pretty easy to do:

First you just type the story summary for the community. Then you type in keys words that are clickable. For this fic, you used "(come in... )". You highlight those words, then click on the icon that looks like a globe with a chain underneath it. It will say "Insert/Edit Link" when you touch the icon. Afterward it asks to inset a web address, and for this story, you put in the web address to your original journal entry which is "http://cherokee62.livejournal.com/3250.html". Hope that helps.

cherokee62 April 22 2010, 03:20:16 UTC

Thanks so much! I;ll give it a try on my next posting.