"Sam, come on, man," his brother was saying. "The Devil's locked up. Don't let him win." Dean's eyes hardened. His shoulders tensed, determination showing in every line of his body. "Damn it, Sam, I won't let you go!"
And the part where Sam says "He let me jump" at the end. Wonderful story, with all the tension and emotion of the original scene. Great work, Judith. :)
Thank you. What inspired me, though, was the cap we picked. That raw emotion on Sam's face, the way he was looking at Dean...and the idea that right next to Dean, parallel to him, was the Devil. The picture really was a wonderful impetus for the story.
I love the way you had Lucifer play on all of Sam's hopes and fears and insecurities. And the effortless, seamless way you weave between the different memories is just sublime.
But that line "He let me jump" - my goodness, that just kills me!
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Did you read Nanoks' entry to the contest? http://nanoks.livejournal.com/281367.html
You'll like it, too.
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"Sam, come on, man," his brother was saying. "The Devil's locked up. Don't let him win." Dean's eyes hardened. His shoulders tensed, determination showing in every line of his body. "Damn it, Sam, I won't let you go!"
And the part where Sam says "He let me jump" at the end. Wonderful story, with all the tension and emotion of the original scene. Great work, Judith. :)
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But that line "He let me jump" - my goodness, that just kills me!
Great story!
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