Winchester Fun: The Bet Chapter 10

[womanofletters]

by Woman of Letters

Disclaimer: Supernatural and its characters belong to Kripke and company. I am making no money off of this. All original characters that I created for this story belong to me.

Previous Chapters: [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9]

Chapter 10: Tough Love

Comments

[robinv123]

Fantastic! I love the characters you have mixing with our beloved Winchesters!
Love,
Robin

[womanofletters]

Thank you! I'm glad you like them.

[cuddyclothes]

Very good. My one criticism is that Harry and Molly almost have cartoon accents. If you gave them a little less, it would still suggest how they were saying it. Also, if they're gray-haired, why do they have "bairns"? Did I miss something?

Otherwise, following with interest.

[womanofletters]

Thanks so much for the suggestion. I'll look into it again and see where I can make the accents less cartoony. (When I have the time.)

About the bairns -- that's a good question. I wanted them to be older, in their 50s or 60s, but then, it would be much less likely for them to have young kids.

But then, Harry is a special case, and he's got a sweet spot for kids. So they might be grandkids, or adopted. Or just someone's kids that Molly was babysitting for the night. Or they might be like some of the Orthodox Jewish families I know, with large families, where the older kids are married off and the youngest ones (still little) are still in the house.