Comments | wolfish_willow: fic: Mystery Spot Misunderstanding

wolfish_willow

fic: Mystery Spot Misunderstanding - 1/?, PG-13

Apr 21, 2010 00:22

Title: Mystery Spot Misunderstanding
Author: wolfish_willow
Pairing: Sam/Gabriel
Rating: NC-17 overall (PG-13 this chapter)
Genre: angst, hurt/comfort
Spoilers: Mystery Spot, Changing Channels, The Monster at the End of This Book
Warnings: unbeta-ed.
Word Count: 1452
Disclaimer: Not my characters. Just using them for a bit of fun. They belong to Kripke.
Summary ( Read more... )

character: sam, genre: hurt/comfort, writing, sam/gabriel, fanfiction, rating:pg-13, slash, spn, genre: angst, fic: mystery spot misunderstanding, character: gabriel

Comments 34

dontkillspike April 21 2010, 08:45:48 UTC

Definitely interested in reading more!

Sam and Gabriel both sound like they could do with a hug. :(

wolfish_willow April 21 2010, 09:04:00 UTC

Yes. They are rather hugless at the moment. Thanks for reading. I'm working on a bit more tonight before I finally give in to sleep. Thanks so much for the comment. ^-^

denazia April 21 2010, 10:56:18 UTC

Oh, noes! You broke them up!!! *sniffle* But what we have here is an epic failure to communicate and so very in character it's downright scary. I hope you're going to fix them *makes puppy dog eyes*

wolfish_willow April 21 2010, 20:09:44 UTC

Like I can resist puppy dog eyes. I'm certainly going to try to fix them. No worries. ;D Thanks for reading and commenting.

blueskypenguin April 21 2010, 11:35:25 UTC

ohmigod, FIX IT.

*wibble*

wolfish_willow April 21 2010, 21:03:41 UTC

I'm working on it, I promise. Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

vlbuehle April 21 2010, 12:00:01 UTC

Okay, please, you must continue! Please! This was great. I loved that Gabriel felt guilty over Mystery Spot, and that he realized he'd chosen the way that amused him rather than one which would teach Sam--as if anything could've taught Sam that particular lesson! It was a great touch that he stuck around and watched Sam for those six months, though.

And the communication fail was epic, and yes, utterly in character for them both. I especially liked how Sam immediately decided Gabriel couldn't stand him because of how he acted, not because of what Gabriel did during Mystery Spot.

wolfish_willow April 21 2010, 21:05:52 UTC

I'm glad I was able to keep them in character. ^-^ Thanks so much for the great comment! I'm working on fixing them. But there is some more angst in their future, first, I think.

eris_raine April 21 2010, 15:24:48 UTC

I loved this, and I would love love LOVE to see more!

wolfish_willow April 21 2010, 21:08:12 UTC

Working on more, so no worries. ^-^ Thanks for the comment! :D