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When I Fall - Chapter 6/6

Mar 03, 2010 19:49

When I Fall (6/6) - Tablo/Eunhyuk (Daniel/Hyukjae)
Romance/Comedy (coffeehouse!au), PG13
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Summary: After three years of college, Hyukjae decided to take a year off to "find himself." It wasn't long before he started questioning what it was he really wanted to find.

Chapter 1 / Chapter 2 / Chapter 3 / Chapter 4 / Chapter 5 / Chapter 6

( Hyukjae had wanted to bask in the exhilaration of it all, to stay in that moment of just being with Daniel, but Junsu had shoved a mop at him and reminded him that he was still at work. )

pairing: tablo/eunhyuk, au: coffeehouse

Comments 36

rodiy March 5 2010, 07:16:12 UTC

Oh that's right, I was in the middle of commenting on this when run happened.

I can't pinpoint (and by can't I mean am too sleepy to) what you changed in the Kangin-Junsu talk that made it sound more concrete than yesterday, but :Db for that.

Awkward blohyuk always makes me grin and smooching in public, have those boys no shame?

I await for your epilogue!

wobaozhewo March 5 2010, 08:38:11 UTC

;___; ♥

Maybe it was the whole tying back to Daniel thing. The scene now reads as if Hyuk is analyzing their relationship, rahter than just some crap happening and then sadface. lol. XD

I really could not have done this without you ♥ T___T Thank you~

rodiy March 5 2010, 17:38:07 UTC

I finally remembered what I had wanted to originally comment on before I got all side tracked with the sidetracking.

Blo didn't know the napkin was Hyuk? He just digged his monkey face from the start?

Yes, I think it was the tying back to Daniel thing, it makes it feels more concrete than BUT WAIIII D: AND *__* BLO I SEE YOU.

You're not quite finished yet, so save your thanks when you get to the end. >D

wobaozhewo March 5 2010, 21:34:23 UTC

He didn't know. And he thought hyuk's monkey face was cute, but it wasn't even until he realized "oh hey, this kid. he's staring at me. a lot. that's so weird." and then time passes and he thinks hyuk is interesting, that he finally goes "hey. this kid. is pretty awesome. gotta get me summa dat."

lol.

xiaoninger March 5 2010, 07:44:38 UTC

.......................................
CUTENESS OVERLOAD. I AM SHUTTING DOWN NOW. LIKE NOW. NOW NOW NOW CAUSE ITS SO CUTE AND AWKWARD AND FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF--
beep.

AHHHHH HYUKJAE AND TABLO.. HOW THEY'RE STILL SO AWKWARD BUT AW THEY MAKE THINGS WORK. WORK SO WELL. AGH.
the napkin. the napkin. ;A;
I WAS LITERALLY TEARING MY HAIR OUT AT THE BEAUTIFUL
and squealing to my sister, who was like 'TABLO IS MARRIED SHUT UP'
SKFDJLJSDFLKDJRIJSP these two are so gorgeously human and they click awkwardly but perfectly and OH DANIEL YOU ARE SO RIGHT AT THE END.
this beats any other romance, vampires or mafias or high school be damned because THIS. this made me believe 'love is worth it' more than anything else ;A;
you are such a winner
sorry i suck at comments, i just want you to know that THINK OF HOW GOOD IT FEELS WHEN YOU CAN DO ANYTHING.
and multiply that by like 100x YOU HAVE HOW I FEEL WHEN TABLO:
"Destiny, destiny. It's like we were meant to be from the start," Daniel murmured against his mouth, in amazement, in ecstatic wonder. ( ... )

wobaozhewo March 5 2010, 09:50:19 UTC

LOL. They are completely cute. 8) Enough to want to use expletives XD ♥ Sadly, your sister is right and Tablo is married to a very super hot and chillax lady, but! Blohyuk has its fandom XD And who says we can't ship them all 8D

8ooo hmm, vampires... lol 8D Love is worth whatever value you're willing to place in it :) I'm happy to have brought the love of Blohyuk to you. Daniel's amazement is no less than Hyuk deserves, and vice versa ;_;

Haha, you defn don't suck at comments :3 That you comment at all on this is really amazing to me ♥ Thank you so much for keeping up with this ;;

xiaoninger March 6 2010, 06:56:29 UTC

like my dad just said in his deadpan lowercase on skype
'got to catch them all...... pokemon..'
except this time its shipping <333

vampires have probably lost much favor these days, what with the sparkling going on these days. i know it's made me frown XDDD
and your words are so true ;A; sjflkjsdtlisrjd these kids are too cute, not to mention your writing. @_@

you definitely deserve a comment on every chapter. replying to say, i love you! thank you for finishing this! <333

wobaozhewo March 7 2010, 03:06:26 UTC

lol, I'm fine with any genre, sparkling vampires or no, as long as I get my fix. haha. I would prefer if Hyuk only sparkled with sweat though, just cause... well. He's a jewel boy and all, but... lol, I'd rather not have him sparkling as if he were encrusted in diamonds. Awkward.

Haha, idk about me deserving anything here, but let's just kick back and be thankful everywhere 8D ♥

baby_buggs March 5 2010, 22:11:33 UTC

ahhh!!!!! LOVEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

they're so cute and adorable and i love them so much. ^^

wobaozhewo March 5 2010, 23:25:50 UTC

haha, I love them, too TT ♥

Thanks for reading~ :)

konzatsu March 6 2010, 10:08:36 UTC

eee! you finished it! i really enjoyed the whole thing. :)

wobaozhewo March 7 2010, 03:10:42 UTC

That I did 8)... Almost. Still an epilogue to go~ sigh.

Thank you for reading! :3

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wobaozhewo March 14 2010, 02:44:09 UTC

haha, late reply xD i'm sorry :'(

Their awkwardness and their humanity and the idea of their ~destiny~ haha is sort of why I love them.

Yeah, this pairing is really rare and I almost feel guilty for being just about the only person left that bothers to write it (or prod others to write it haha). But I'm really happy that ppl can still enjoy it, ship it or not :) And, haha, you don't have to be good at leaving comments, but that you took the time to leave me a note ♥ ^^

Thank you ♥