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When I Fall - Chapter 5/6

Feb 09, 2010 22:04

When I Fall (5/6) - Tablo/Eunhyuk (Daniel/Hyukjae)
Romance/Comedy (coffeehouse!au), PG13
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Summary: After three years of college, Hyukjae decided to take a year off to "find himself." It wasn't long before he started questioning what it was he really wanted to find.

Chapter 1 / Chapter 2 / Chapter 3 / Chapter 4 / Chapter 5 / Chapter 6

( While Sungmin was very considerate calling Junsu over to comfort him, he wasn't known for being the most helpful best friend. Especially when he caused a part of the problem, the douche. )

pairing: tablo/eunhyuk, au: coffeehouse

Comments 30

notablender February 10 2010, 09:22:04 UTC

YES I AM FIRST

notablender February 10 2010, 09:27:03 UTC

i waited to finish my pset before reading

我太喜欢这个故事了！

guh there is something about the way you write their scenes together that literally hurts my chest when i read it. it's like cardio-keysmash. guh is all. guh! in particular i love flustered daniel and how he acknowledges trying to seem put-together.

i love the kiss! the second one is even better than the first.

wobaozhewo February 10 2010, 10:20:15 UTC

真的吗???　感谢你了~ ;___;

I pulled my own heartstrings writing that scene... So much so that I had to end it like that XD So yes, I apologize for letting Jeongsik ruin the mood. That kiss was fun for everyone, I'm sure 8D

♥

hezai February 10 2010, 10:04:07 UTC

MEEEEEEE

hezai February 10 2010, 10:31:54 UTC

i still like your characterization; even the part about daniel's height 8D
loved the second kiss, and the foreheads touching, hyukjae wanting more contact with daniel, and daniel laughing into his chest ...

oh is it gonna end soon? nuuuuuuuuu ;___;

wobaozhewo February 11 2010, 00:19:36 UTC

I'm glad you do :) ... lol, Daniel is shorter than Hyuk by just a little tiny bit, but sitting up on the counter makes him infinitely more so XD it's a fun picture. Those parts are my favorite too~ ♥

The end is coming soon, sadly :( But hopefully, it'll be a good one! :)

Thanks for commenting :)

ranwae February 10 2010, 15:07:33 UTC

yay finally ^_^ ♥

and lol tukutz cameo :3

wobaozhewo February 11 2010, 00:20:52 UTC

IT a very big "Finally" for me too :D They deserve a lot of love. ♥

Haha... Yes. His cockblocking is wonderful. :|

Thanks for reading ^^

todefinebeauty February 10 2010, 17:19:35 UTC

I LIKE DANIEL'S SHORTNESS IN HERE. Bahahah and their awkwardness! Because it's so them, this being awkward but at the same time being so compatible in their awkwardness :3

"I tried going after you that day, you know. But," Daniel grinned, "You run very fast."

HAHA I can just imagine him running fruitlessly after Hyuk... Hyuk with the long legs and Tablo with his, uh, not-so-long legs. And getting out of breath before he gets to the end of the hallway. OH DANIEL.

ALSO A+ TO A-CLASS SECOND BASE MATERIAL. I giggled inside when I read that, oh Hyuk! And I see Daniel's creeping hand hohohoho. Nnnnghh moooreeee kissssinngggg. I love how Hyukjae's thoughts keep on going throughout the kiss, how there isn't some sudden revelation or blanking out of thoughts because not all kisses are like that!

TUKUTZ YOU COCKBLOCK. Omg, and Youngwoon - I love all your secondary characters in this! Jungsoo and his emo cyworld entries... haha.

wobaozhewo February 11 2010, 01:02:33 UTC

LOL. IRL he's only like.. an inch shorter or something... and it's probably the shoelifts, tbqh. Hyuk cheats 8D I love blohyuk for that strange quality of theirs XD ( ... )

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wobaozhewo February 11 2010, 00:22:06 UTC

Aren't they? 8) ♥