Comments | wmhs100: Midnight Cravings (Puck/Quinn, PG-13)

kait_18 in wmhs100

Midnight Cravings (Puck/Quinn, PG-13)

Apr 25, 2010 19:11

Title: Mightnight Cravings
Author: kait_18
Characters: Quinn/Puck
Challenge: Fair
Rating: PG-13 (just to be safe. Nothing bad in it)

“Puck,” he felt Quinn’s bony elbow jab his spine.

“What?” He mumbled back sleepily.

“I want a sandwich.”

“You want a what?” he rolled over to face her. “Jesus, Quinn, it’s 2 am.”

“But I’m hungry.”

“Make your own damn sandwich. ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, character: quinn fabray, challenge: fair, character: noah puckerman, author: kait_18

Comments 5

cruiscin_lan April 25 2010, 23:54:38 UTC

THERE HAD BETTER BE CHEESE, PUCK.

kait_18 April 25 2010, 23:59:09 UTC

LOL, yes! There is so much more I would have done with this had it not been for the 100 word limit. Like this:

Quinn smiled, satisfied as Puck got out of bed and headed to the kitchen. "Works every time, kid." She whispered, rubbing her belly.

cruiscin_lan April 26 2010, 00:21:28 UTC

I think you could get away with adding even more in the comments.

I'm a bad influence in a drabble comm. I just want to tell everyone "WRITE MORE."

boysinperil April 27 2010, 06:14:21 UTC

It was so perfect though! Seriously exactly a pregnant woman conversation.

abluegirl April 27 2010, 02:35:39 UTC

LOL, this is awesome. I love the last line. :D