To: dr_oil From: coalsparrow

Jan 02, 2010 23:39

Artist: coalsparrow
Title: The Lone and Level
Rating: PG
Characters: Adrian Veidt/Ozymandias
Setting: Post-Karnak
Warnings: Self-reflection - not very actiony.

“Nothing ever ends.”

Three small, simple words, only one multisyllabic. No complicated code to break, no pattern to find-to most this would not even seem a riddle. Yet, Adrian Veidt had ( Read more... )

for: dr_oil, from: coalsparrow, fanfic

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tortoisegirl January 3 2010, 19:17:02 UTC
Adrian Veidt would not fall prey to this Ozymandias syndrome.

The different levels of irony in this line are fantastic. I like the way you tied it all together- Jon's "nothing ever ends" and Rorschach's journal and Adrian's own apprehensions about what he did. Also, Sally doing public charity work post-squid is something I hadn't thought of for her, but it makes a lot of sense and I really like it.

Great job!

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coalsparrow January 6 2010, 04:48:18 UTC
Thank you tortoisegirl! Glad you enjoyed. <3

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