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nikiwlkr in wliialove

My first poem ever

Dec 25, 2008 15:57

Title: Love
Author: nikiwlkr
Pairing: Wayne/ wl guy you desire
Raiting: PG
Summary: This is my first poem ever to be written, so I don't know if I did this okay. Oh btw this is from Wayne's POV.

( Love is pure poetry....urm I mean that this is my first poem )

#fan fiction 2007-2008, -nikiwlkr, form:poetry

Comments 5

xnadex December 26 2008, 07:34:20 UTC

:( But also sweet and happy, you know? Nice mixed emotions. I will point out that you wrote 'somethind' here: I can tell that somethind bad has. And also 'happen' instead of happened.
But otherwise nice poem; a good first effort! :D

nikiwlkr December 26 2008, 12:32:23 UTC

I tried to make it good. Oops that's suppose to be 'something' instead of 'somethind', I tend to do that at times so I better fix that. Oh okay, I see now with the 'happen' I guess it's about time that I get a beta.

Thank you.

xnadex December 26 2008, 13:14:48 UTC

It was, very nice. :)

But yes, I think beta readers can be very helpful. Although I've never used one myself, so I'm probably not really one to talk XD

You're welcome!

iluvdrewcarey December 28 2008, 14:01:45 UTC

awww that's so sweet!
I really like it! Well done!

kyndredspyryt December 30 2008, 19:50:22 UTC

Fabby first poem!! Welldone!

Thanks for sharing! :D