A Day in the Line - Chapter Seventeen

[bookishlady242]

Hey, everybody! Time for another chapter. I hope this doesn't screw anything up, but I'm using my actual username now instead of Blossomcup, so if one of the mods could make it a tag, that'd be great. (Thank you in advance to whomever does it.)

This chapter is rated NC-17 for Ryan/Colin action. You've been warned.

A Day in the Line
By bookishlady242

Comments

[chugirl21]

wow, this was one hot chapter ;) and i felt so sorry for josie and her car lol *hugs* nice update

[bookishlady242]

I know, I'm so cruel to her. ;)

And thank you! I like to know I'm doing well at writing smex.

[luvstories]

Ha ha at Ryan ordering Drew to share, being Dad...and then "Daddy" for Col. Holy Crap, that was HAWT (and btw, welcome to the ranks of "those who have written a sex scene with a vibrator in it")
"Yell for me, baby."
Crap, man. Somebody go get me a cigarette.

And ahh, Drew. Somehow I sense that he's telling himself that stuff, but does he really believe it???

Wonderful stuff, yet again, Sugar! MORE SOON! MORE SOON!
(Applause)

[bookishlady242]

Hehehehe. Yeah, Ryan does strike me as the father figure of the group, so I like having him be the one to tell them to share. And I'm so glad I did a good job at the sex scene! (I love using toys in my fics, so the vibrator seemed a nice touch.)

And it's interesting you touch on that with Drew, because, not soon, but sometime in this story, there's gonna be a thing where they have to confront that.

MORE WILL COME SOON! MORE WILL COME SOON! :D

Thank you! *bows*