A Day in the Line - Chapter Sixteen

Aug 04, 2010 14:37

The avatar kinda stems from what all the guys are thinking at their jobs. :) Thanks so much for the praise, guys. There's a little more steamy but not-quite-there stuff in here, by the way.

A Day in the Line
By bookishlady242 AKA Taylor
Rated PG-13, rating subject to change
Pairings: Drew/Greg, Ryan/Colin, Chip/Brad, Wayne/Jeff
Summary: The gang share ( Read more... )

-blossomcup, fic:a day in the line

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luvstories August 5 2010, 08:22:07 UTC
JEFFIE KICKS ASS!
Ryan cooking bacon = one HILARIOUS visual.
And OOooOooOO! HAWTNESS ensues!

Just one thing. Didn't somebody point out a couple o chapters ago that there are eight gay men in this house...and they call it "LUBING" the pan?

Tee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee!

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bookishlady242 August 5 2010, 20:14:35 UTC
Hehehehehehehe! Yeah, you're not the only one who noticed that slightly sexual pun. I was wondering if anyone would point that out. :)

Yeah, I liked writing Ryan's cluelessness about cooking breakfast for Colin. And he certainly loves to embrace him at every provocation, which is extremely fun to write. :D

Thank you, m'dear! More will come soon.

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blindlyluv August 5 2010, 16:37:56 UTC
1. I am so delighted and jiswiggled (?) to see this fic (and you) back among us.

2. What does one 'lube' a pan with to make eggs, and why does that sound worse when I re-read it?

3. Really, really great characters.

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bookishlady242 August 5 2010, 20:17:47 UTC
1. Oh, you are just too kind! I feel so glad to be back among such wonderful people. :)

2. Normally when you cook eggs, you put butter on the bottom of the pan so they won't stick. (Or you can use cooking spray.) I just always called it 'lubing', and having a dirty mind, thought it might make a nice pun. :P

3. Such a compliment! Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

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chugirl21 August 5 2010, 21:31:23 UTC
this was just brilliant ^^ poor jeffy hehe and i loved how ryan tried to make breakfast lol :) i so feel for these guys from working at a bakery and a supermarket ;) *hugs*

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bookishlady242 August 5 2010, 23:11:08 UTC
Yeah, I work in a supermarket as well, so I definitely understand. All retail jobs make us idiot magnets. ;)

Thank you so much! :)

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