Psychosocial - Chapter 4

[improvfan88]

Hi! I know that I've not posted for a long time so hopefully this will make it up! I give you smut and in the next chapter MORE SMUT!

Author: improvfan88.
Story: Psychosocial.
Rating: NC-17.
Pairing: Ry/Col.
Disclaimer: It's AU. Duh.

Comments

[blindlyluv]

blindlyluv luvs u 'n ur writing more than words can sa~

[improvfan88]

:D I always love your comments :D I feel the love :P

[boppotheclown]

I've been waiting for this for a long time!! Glad that it's back :D

Totally love this chapter. And Dogma is one of the best movie ever!!! XD

[improvfan88]

Yeah, I absolutely love Dogma. Jay and Silent Bob rock! As does Alan Rickman in that film.
Glad you like it, I just had so much to do over the past month! :( But nothing to do now, so concentrating on this! :D

[boppotheclown]

Haha I don't really like Jay, but I agree with Silent Bob (although for me, Metatron is ze best! Lol)

oh good to hear that. I totally understand, I can barely update my journal as well because life has been so busy. Yaay for more updates!!! XD

[improvfan88]

Metatron rocks! :P
But yeah, boo for busy life! Wants a holiday!

[yamina_chan]

Okay, this really wasn't a chapter I'd prefer to read ^^'
But that is just my personal taste, I can't judge properly if it was good or bad. However, there were some nice/sweet moments.

[blindlyluv]

Just out of curiosity, why are you reading it? Why would you prefer not to?

[yamina_chan]

I'm reading the story because I like the general idea. It's kinda like a mix between Whose Line and Criminal Minds. XD
Also, since it is AU, I am fine with Colin and Ryan beeing together in a romantic way. However, I don't like to read anything that goes beyond hugs or kisses. If people are doing more (no matter what sex they have) I kinda switch to some sort of gallop through the text. (I hope that's right XD' My dictionary tells me that this is the right phrase to use hee, but it sounds strange XD)
It just doens't belong in a story in my oppionion. It's more disturbing the plot then helping it grow XD

[blindlyluv]

Thanks for your reply. This is an excellent and intense story, by one of the best. Well worth reading, even if you need to gallop through some of the text, although some of us come to a complete stop and greatly enjoy the parts you don't, which are known as smut. Enjoy what you are comfortable with.

[luvstories]

IT"S BAAACK!!! WOOOT!

(Sorry it took me so long to get to it, but I'm SOO glad I did!!!

SEX? YES! WELL DONE! Your keen grasp of steamy romance is lovely on many levels! Farbeit from me to disagree with a fellow whoserslasher, I think this scene does wonderful things for the story and indeed makes it very lovey-dovey-and cuddly as well as HAWT.

Great read! Nicely executed! MORE SOON PLEASE!

Oh, and JERSEY REPRESENT!!!

[improvfan88]

:D Thank you! You know how much your comments mean to me too :)
More shall be posted soon! I acutally written out how this story is going to pan out, but not sure how many chapters it's gonna be! :P
But I can guarantee more sex and definitely more gore. I've been watching gory horror films for ideas. I've got ideas but also nightmares too :P
Hee hee hee, I've just watching clips on youtube on Silent Bob talking, it's weird! :P

[graciewoooo]

LOL I got scared when Ryan switched on Seven because I was like "I'm hoping this doesn't have the same plot as mine :|"

Luckily...I don't think it has lmao. And btw, Dogma....EPIC WIN!
AMAZING chapter, and omfg smut was so hottt!!!!!

Loving the Chapter and the whole fic ^^
xx

[improvfan88]

No, no! It's just some maniac going round killing poor poor men.

And Dogmna seems to have had a good reception too! :P
Thankies for the smut compliment, I try :D