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[FIC] Intermission (Title challenge response)

Aug 28, 2005 13:16

Title: Intermission
Author: Clay
Pairing: Ryan/Colin
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Response to title challenge. I’d like to introduce you to...

( Mmm, vodka... )

a: clayangel, g: smut, p: colin/ryan, g: pre-wl

Comments 5

indybaggins August 28 2005, 18:45:31 UTC

Oh. Dear. God.

I am rather speachless right now as my brain is still preoccupied with the image I just read. That was very, very hot.
And slightly sad too, in a way, with Pat as the waitress.
Gosh, I'm blusing ;)

Great job!

leatharegee August 29 2005, 03:00:42 UTC

Aah! OHMYGODILOVEIT!

That was so freaking unbelievably great! I like how Pat was in there breifly, I like how you mingled the two different stories, and I like how you wrapped it all up, I like it all!!! I think it's one of my favorite stories you've written so far. ^_^

Yay!

violent_rabbit August 29 2005, 15:32:30 UTC

This was excellent. I salute you!

ryanmochrie February 1 2006, 19:08:38 UTC

amazing story and damn that was hot...There was the sound of spitting, an improvised, but effective lube lol nothing like alittle improv!

holl_e_wood July 16 2009, 05:42:17 UTC

"straight as a God damned Hallmark card"

LOL.

As I continue my perusal of the earliest stories in the archive, I continue to be impressed ^_^ This was great!