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Affliction, Part 11/13

Sep 07, 2010 12:20

Title: Affliction, Part 11/13
Author: illyriaone (Thesseli)
Pairing: Colin/Ryan
Rating: R
Summary: I once swore I would never write a vampire story...
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Type of Feedback Desired: Any.

( Colin was still shaken by what he’d done in the hall )

p: colin/ryan, c: kathy, c: colin, c: brad, c: drew, c: ryan, c: greg, c: jeff, s: affliction, a: illyriaone

Comments 3

rycolfan September 7 2010, 16:45:59 UTC

Awesome! Love the guys all being supportive (except Brad of course!) and I chuckled at Greg's last line! Can't wait to see how this ends! ^_^

jie_jie September 7 2010, 18:09:50 UTC

Really enjoyed this chapter, am a sucker for conflict.

...And Greg's last line made me laugh too!

crabby_monkey September 8 2010, 14:39:46 UTC

"To tell the truth, he’d always figured that Ryan and Colin would end up together; he just hadn’t expected it to involve vampirism."

Best line ever!

And I could see Greg being curious (and perhaps a little titillated).
Love this. (I wonder how Jeff would have reacted?)