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[Ficlet] "Darling, you were made for me"

Aug 30, 2010 22:24

Title: "Darling, you were made for me"
Author: Jie Jie
Rating: PG
Pairings: Colin/Ryan, Pat/Ryan
Wordcount: 1195
Summary: Ryan marries Pat, Colin watches.
Warning: Angst, slash, angst, het and skewing of the canon for dramatic purposes, did I mention angst?

A/N: Sequel to The Way the World Ends but can be read as a stand alone. Any feedback would be much ( Read more... )

g: angst, c: ryan, a: jie jie, p: colin/ryan, p: pat/ryan, c: colin

Comments 5

rycolfan August 29 2010, 21:39:38 UTC

Ouch! You keep on wounding my heart with this! *sniff*

Great work but...*wibble*

I need fluff...stat! ^_^

jie_jie August 29 2010, 21:45:25 UTC

Aw, I didn't mean to make you wibble...well maybe a little bit. ^_^ Thanks for the comment!

It's all part of my secret plan to make you write more WFI...Mwahaha! *rubs hands together*

rycolfan August 29 2010, 21:47:49 UTC

That's just mean...even if it does stand a good chance of working! ^_^

pdglyph August 30 2010, 04:06:58 UTC

I love this pair of fics!

The character interplay is great. Pat's reaction to the people all saying the same thing to her, Brad being so angry on Colin's behalf, Colin's talk with Pat (almost made me cry!) And I really liked Pat & Ryan's interaction...

Excellent work. Is there any possibility that you could continue this series?

~Glyph

jie_jie August 30 2010, 09:28:10 UTC

Yay, glad you liked it! Thanks, am especially relieved that you liked Pat, I really wasn't sure of her voice in this.

I think there may be another part, if my muse decides to play nice that is...