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[Ficlet] The Pilot

Jul 31, 2010 14:26

Title: The Pilot
Author: Jie Jie
Rating: PG
Pairing: Colin/Ryan
Word Count: 1200

Summary: After the demise of Whose Line, Ryan makes a choice between his career and Colin..

( A fork stuck in the road... )

g: angst, c: ryan, a: jie jie, p: colin/ryan, c: colin

Comments 10

sungreen70 July 31 2010, 13:43:07 UTC

Oh, man. You have me misty eyed here. I love how subtle it is with the somewhat open ending. It feels very real. Great work!

jie_jie July 31 2010, 14:59:37 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked it! I wanted this to go fluffy at the end but the characters weren't having any of it...

sungreen70 July 31 2010, 18:04:03 UTC

Yeah, fluff wouldn't have worked as well. I'm glad you let it go the way it did. :)

jie_jie July 31 2010, 18:31:39 UTC

^_^ Yeah I think you're right, this one wasn't meant to be fluffy! Thanks for the lovely comments.

rycolfan July 31 2010, 15:03:56 UTC

Wow...what a lovely fic to come back to! :o)

I think you did a great job with the characters and the ending was perfect. Well done you! x

jie_jie July 31 2010, 15:10:21 UTC

Welcome back! :) Thank you muchly.

Very glad that you like the ending. It's not the way that I wanted it to go but Colin was insistent that he wanted to leave so who am I to stop him! x

draconica_nova August 1 2010, 13:50:18 UTC

Wow, Ryan truly is a cuddly bear in big shoes. It's heart-breaking. D:
I can see how Ryan might've rejected GS for the reasons he mentiond here, and it's entirely plausible that Colin would've fought for him just like this, which is so sweet!

Lovely work! Very believable and a great scenario, too. ^^
<3

jie_jie August 1 2010, 14:10:02 UTC

Lol! Aw, I want a Ry-bear complete with flame shoes! ^_^

Every time I watched Green Screen I just couldn't help but notice the massive gap left by Ryan. It's so odd to see nearly all the Whose Line cast together without him! And then I read he'd done a pilot episode for it but it was never aired and just had to have a go at writing a scene around it. Very pleased you thought it was believable, that's a really nice compliment to get! *is happy*

newbiepoet August 3 2010, 17:48:01 UTC

This is just brilliant, pure and simple. And what makes it sadder is the fact Ryan is right, in my estimation anyway.

I did laugh at Ryan's "Them's fightin' words" quite a lot. I'm not sure why, the imagery just fitted so easily into place, as it did the whole way through.

Sungreen said it best; its very real.

jie_jie August 3 2010, 20:51:41 UTC

Wow. Thanks for the lovely comment. Really glad you liked it. And glad Ryan's line made you laugh! ^_^