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If Betrayal were a Cocktail... [Chapter 2]

Jul 25, 2010 00:11

Title: If Betrayal were a Cocktail… [2/3]
Pairing: Ryan/Colin
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Sex, swearing and plenty of angst.

Summary: You can’t expect to embark on a relationship in Hollywood without being noticed…

Author’s Notes: This isn't my most favourite chapter ever, so please be nice. xD

( I sensed that any minute, Dan would've been tending to a black eye, or maybe a broken nose. )

c: ryan, s: if betrayal were a cocktail…, a: draconica_nova, p: colin/ryan, c: colin

Comments 10

jie_jie July 24 2010, 23:54:30 UTC

Evil, evil Dan! *kicks* The suspense is killing me, what are they going to do? I got really scared for a moment that Dan was just gonna air the tape in front of the whole Whose Line cast, that would have been very, very bad.

I love your characterisation so far, especially your angry Ryan. I was cheering him on when he was threatening Dan. My favourite line is the brief moment of sweetness when Colin entwines his fingers with Ryan's, very nice.

More please! x

draconica_nova July 25 2010, 14:54:07 UTC

Yeeah! Re-unite all fans by kicking Dan!

Airing the tape in front of the cast was gonna be the plan at one point, but for some reason it tapered off to a private viewing. Hee. xD

Thank you, lovely. 8D xxx

jie_jie July 26 2010, 16:24:09 UTC

Woohoo! Can we have badges? ^_^

I think Dan would have played his hand too soon if he'd have screened it to everyone straight away...much more potential for blackmail and tension this way!

draconica_nova July 26 2010, 22:16:44 UTC

Haha! Apparently, he's got the brains to pull off a successful blackmail. We've underestimated the man. xD

charminglygawky July 25 2010, 11:41:17 UTC

O_o I can kill Dan pls?

I was so worried when I read part 1 of this (sorry for lack of comments, I've barely been online for the last few days.) and I can't tell you how relieved I was when I realised that the betrayal was gonna be external.

And wow what a betrayal, incredible. Ooo angry!Ryan; I like. I agree with jie_jie that the characterisation is spot on, I feel sorry for Dan sometimes. He can't possibly be as bad as we make him out to be but it is fun!

Can't wait to see what they choose!

draconica_nova July 25 2010, 14:59:28 UTC

Dan-murder! Go ahead! XD
We should all probably give Dan a bit of slack - after all, if it weren't for him we'd have no fandom, and that would be sad. D:

Thanks! More soon. :D

saiya_tina July 26 2010, 06:44:57 UTC

DAN! *chases him with an axe* You rotten English SOB!

Ha, as if the show will go on without them! Dan, you have no idea what you got yourself into! You go, guys!

draconica_nova July 26 2010, 07:36:22 UTC

XD! You're just awesome. S'all I'm gonna say. :D
x

rycolfan August 1 2010, 00:47:56 UTC

Ooooh bastard, bastard, BASTARD! I shall join the witch hunt for Dan's head! Don't let him win guys - just kill him and bury the body!!!

tardis_type40 March 9 2017, 04:11:42 UTC

Oooh... I really hate Dan sometimes... Iove the way you write the tension in this chapter, and Ryan's anger is just breathtaking. (Hehe, breathtaking anger management issues, see if you can get the reference). I would love to see more of this if your able.