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FIC: Nothing More Than Strangers (Part 8)

Jan 30, 2006 15:04

Title: Nothing More Than Strangers (Part 8)

Rating: R

Pairing: Ryan/Colin

Summary: ( Hating himself a little for pushing this, and hating Colin a little for not trying harder to stop him, he studies the photo of the two of them until his eyes burn - but only because he hasn't blinked. )

s: nothing more than strangers, a: knowyourlips, p: colin/ryan

Comments 20

indybaggins January 30 2006, 07:34:05 UTC

-Dhhhh- Oh... Pictures! In wallets!

Major love. Always, forever. Your fic, and me, and me and your fic, and... Dhhh!

This was bloody good. Every time there's a new chapter I just have to know what comes next and yeah... It's a major compliment that it only takes a couple pages for get me all crazy and incoherent about this again.

To sum it up: Emma=writer=good. *laughs*

knowyourlips February 1 2006, 12:54:41 UTC

Oh, I knew it. You're just using me to get to my fics

;)

And yes, I'm being weird, even for me. O_o

*cracks up* But ... so were you. :P

*hugs*

indybaggins February 1 2006, 16:06:51 UTC

O Yes I am ;) Yay for wierdness! *hugs back*

emilyfairy January 30 2006, 13:44:06 UTC

Ohhh... :( I love the flashbacks and how Colin kept the pictures. And Ryan kept his too... Gahhh, here am I clinging to any bit of sap that I can in the middle of an angsty story. LOL.

There's just so much history between them and you're doing a great job with bringing it all out bit by bit... Although I confess I am dying to know why they aren't together!

Emily :)

knowyourlips February 1 2006, 12:56:35 UTC

Hey, thank you. *smiles*

I clinging to any bit of sap that I can in the middle of an angsty story. LOL. I don't know why that made me laugh. Possibly because I was all, 'yeah, this is kinda depressing, geez ...' *blinks* Sometimes I worry about myself. ;)

kalimyre January 30 2006, 16:42:43 UTC

Just, just... Colin! Ryan! The pictures and the shyness and the memories and what was that about Deb, anyway? Why wouldn't Colin still carry a picture of her? Are they not together or something? And Ryan, who still has his pictures but won't admit it and Colin who could have fought harder to keep Ryan from seeing, but maybe he didn't want to. Maybe he wanted Ryan to know he still has feelings. Maybe he wanted Ryan to have to face that, because Ryan seems intent on ignoring the whole thing, pretending everything is fine.

And mmmm for Ryan and Colin kissing and laughing and playing in a photo booth and I want to see those pictures.

knowyourlips February 1 2006, 13:02:26 UTC

Are they not together or something? *tries to look mysterious* I don't know ... are they? (If you're actually asking; no, they're not. But I don't think I've actually said that anywhere *cracks up* Why are you people not mind readers?)

Maybe if I'd actually written this whole thing out and put - oh, say - the flashbacks in order before I started posting, it wouldn't be half as confusing ;) ... *trails off* Oh well. *takes a deep breath* There's nothing wrong with ... with a ... uh, slow reveal. *nods* Yeah. My story's just intentionally backwards. *rolls eyes*

... I'm sorry. Why am I venting here? *looks around* More to the point; thanks for the comment. And for understanding the two of them, lol. :) Oh, I owe you a comment, I think. *blinks*

carlachameleon January 30 2006, 18:07:46 UTC

Amazing. As usual.

Love this story so much!

knowyourlips February 1 2006, 13:07:37 UTC

Thank you :) You're always really nice about this fic. ;)

krzcowzgomoo January 30 2006, 22:02:39 UTC

Wow.

In short, wow.... (hee hee, leave it to me to put in as few words as possible)

knowyourlips February 1 2006, 13:09:01 UTC

Ha, there's nothing wrong with being ... succinct. ;)

krzcowzgomoo February 4 2006, 14:29:07 UTC

lol, what's with you people and big words? now I have to go look that up! XD