Finally beginning to get this back on track! In this chapter, Colin gets an idea of what it is like to do some police work! Thanks to luvstories for the banner! She rocks! :P I added a word :P
Yeah! They caught Greg! Man, Colin really knows how to turn on the heat! Plus, mmm, Ryan in leather! Yummy! I also like how he revealed himself to Greg, not-dirty! And I also like the last two lines! Those two are so cute!
Aw, does this mean the story's getting over?! :( I'll miss the amazing mysteriousness of this mystery!
Well, no, not really. I've got it planned out you see, if there's still a few twist and turns coming. Here's a hint --> who's not been in the story yet? They will be making an appearance. (2nd hint -- it's not Wayne :P) And yeah, I liked writing that part for Ryan coming up. It just makes him appear so damn sexy! :P But fear not, I reckon at least....another 3. Between 3 and 5 I reckon. I don't think that I'll be leaving Detective Stiles and Doctor Mochrie alone after the story anyway if I can think of another mystery for them!
Well, if we went into detail, including the girls and the UK people, that means a certain portly someone! WHOO! Ryan in anything is sexy! Ryan in nothing particularly! Mm~
Oh yeah, I love the thought of Ryan in leather..........Sorry, concentration break!
He could be, he might not be........You shall have to wait and see!
I think you're thinking what I'm thinking about the next new character :P The next chapter will definitely be up before next Sunday, cos I'm going on holiday :P
Ok, Greg isn't the killer... he may be the next victim. And for a moment there, I had the sinking suspicion that COLIN is the killer! (You're just jealous that the voices talk to me, now hush!)
I can assure you that I will not reveal who the killer is, however, I can assure that I will let you speculate as I love watching you guess :D
However, I will not be cruel! If you guess it correctly, I'll let you know. Maybe..... *mwahahahaha!* (My little voice are beginning now, so I'll apologise and leave :P)
Ah yay for Greg :-) (although boo he got arrested) but I still don't think its Greg.
I've got two guesses and two now for who's going to get killed off next... only one of which is actually in the same category for both... (and I think he's the hint that you said Here's a hint --> who's not been in the story yet? They will be making an appearance. (2nd hint -- it's not Wayne :P)
I'm just now wondering if your going to surprise us completely and have it be a female :-)
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Aw, does this mean the story's getting over?! :( I'll miss the amazing mysteriousness of this mystery!
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And yeah, I liked writing that part for Ryan coming up. It just makes him appear so damn sexy! :P
But fear not, I reckon at least....another 3. Between 3 and 5 I reckon. I don't think that I'll be leaving Detective Stiles and Doctor Mochrie alone after the story anyway if I can think of another mystery for them!
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Ryan is just sexy. I don't know what it is, but he really is!
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That's a Bowling For Soup song is it not? :P
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I don't think its Greg. He seems to obvious. Hmm... *thinks, thinks*
Here's a hint --> who's not been in the story yet?
OMG NO WAI! D8
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He could be, he might not be........You shall have to wait and see!
I think you're thinking what I'm thinking about the next new character :P The next chapter will definitely be up before next Sunday, cos I'm going on holiday :P
Cheers for readings!
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However, I will not be cruel! If you guess it correctly, I'll let you know. Maybe..... *mwahahahaha!* (My little voice are beginning now, so I'll apologise and leave :P)
Thanks for reading though! *sneaks away fast*
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I've got two guesses and two now for who's going to get killed off next... only one of which is actually in the same category for both... (and I think he's the hint that you said Here's a hint --> who's not been in the story yet? They will be making an appearance. (2nd hint -- it's not Wayne :P)
I'm just now wondering if your going to surprise us completely and have it be a female :-)
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Greg had to be arrested though! You shall find out why! But he's a suspect, Ryan n Colin couldn't let him run riot! :P
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But a on the run Greg is so much fun! Mind you that does keep Greggie safe one more night :-D
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Wayne may still be there. I don't actually have a set list as such yet! :P But I do have a plan. Mwahahahaha!
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