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Tapioca - Chapter 5

Jun 30, 2009 15:17

The final part of Tapioca! It's pretty long, but it's my favourite chapter to write. Let me know what you think!

Title: Tapioca
Pairing: Ryan/Colin
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Don't own 'em, I don't have any cigarettes either :(

( Tapioca - Chapter 5 )

a: improvfan88, c: dan, p: colin/ryan, c: wayne, s: tapioca, c: tony

Comments 10

crabby_monkey July 1 2009, 14:18:07 UTC

Sweet! I really enjoyed this one. And I like how Tony becomes a guardian angel who works with Wayne. This works so well as an AU because you take characteristics that each of them has and just *tweaks* them slightly off center.

(And Dan getting shot and not believing they'd do it? Priceless.)

improvfan88 September 8 2009, 23:58:29 UTC

Hey, sorry I'm replying so late to this, I'm so bad for that. Thank you very much though, I feel good when people comment, so I know I'm not writing total shit. That Dan thing was one of my favourite parts. I needed to make sure that Ryan and Colin got their revenge on him before they escaped and that seemed the best way!

Yay!! blindlyluv July 2 2009, 05:10:40 UTC

Perfect ending to a very well written story.

J'aime cette fiction que vous avez écrite. Le grand travail.

jawyer_4eva July 4 2009, 18:49:38 UTC

"get a ferry to Europe, and then drive to the UK from there" - pardon?!?
i can translate the french, but its not how you would write it if you spoke the language. (i.e. je t'aime)
www.wordrefence.com is where you can find a good way to say things... hope this helps.
nice story

Oops! improvfan88 July 4 2009, 23:33:18 UTC

I meant to 'any port in Europe' (I write too fast for my good sometimes, it's changed now.)
Yeah, French isn't one of my strong languages, I hated it in school. I'm better at Scottish, still struggle with English ;)

blindlyluv July 4 2009, 23:41:24 UTC

Perhaps in this AU, the geography, etc. is different? :) The reference is a good one to have, thanks. Most importantly, we agree that it is an enjoyable story.

improvfan88 July 5 2009, 21:58:32 UTC

Yeah, that's it! ;) Blindlyluv's got my back! :D But thanks, I'd never written anything AU before. Trying to write another one now, but focusing on all the guys now. It's harder than I thought!

holl_e_wood July 7 2009, 17:22:36 UTC

I greatly enjoyed this story. Awesomeness!

holl_e_wood July 7 2009, 18:11:13 UTC

Irony: Shortly after I finished reading this, I was watching an episode, and it featured... the "got arrested" irish drinking song! ^_^

improvfan88 July 7 2009, 20:44:39 UTC

That's brilliant :P Hopefully it wasn't the same crimes, then I'm not as imaginative as I think I am. :P Can't remember that one of the top of my head!