1000points - Push

[beccierocks]

Title: Push
Author: Beccie
Table: 1
Pairing: Josie/Jeff, implied Jeff/Caroline
Rating: I'll say R but it could pass as PG-13 I guess
Prompt: Push
Warning: I have three kind of warnings:

1. Although it contains no actual 'smut' per say, has quite an erotic tone. This is the effect I wanted so just be warned that it's not smut but it's not innocent

Comments

[josie_freak]

:O

THIS HAS TO BE THE BEST PAIRING I HAVE EVER READ!

oh my god! i never thought of this pairing and you have written it so well!
GAH! im just going to keep reading it

*toddles off to read again*
eeeeeekkk! just as good as the first time!!

Already told you that i love your fics but this is just the icing on the cake!

Love it beccie well done!

[beccierocks]

Really? Wow! I am honoured! Thank you so much! =D
Jeff/Josie are so strange and almost obscene that they in fact work really well! I found that when writing them anyways! =D
Really glad you liked this because your comment is high praise indeed!
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[josie_freak]

i dont lie when great fics are involved beccie :)

I really did enjoy it

[clayangel]

I saw this when I was making the 2009 fic list, and I was immediately intrigued. I love odd pairings, and these have to be some of the oddest I've seen! I'm so looking forward to this. ^_^

Ooh, starting out with Jeff smoking. ^_^ I like it already.

I loooove the way Josie comes in and her immediate kind of dark and seductive nature. It's such a juxtaposition compared to Jeff's thoughts of her, which is great because she really does seem to be both the virgin and the whore, so to speak.

Her behavior is intriguing, too, with the constantly staying behind him and bowing her head. I really like how...how strange she's being, I guess.

"Lift me up. Push me against the wall.-Heh. ^_^ This is why I love Josie. She so wears the pants in whatever relationship you put her in.

Dude. That was hot. And just so...so cool. ^_^ I loved it. the whole thing just took you on a ride, and it really had the quality of a dream with the slight trippiness, but that didn't make it any less hot. Really, really fantastic.

[beccierocks]

Gotta love an odd pairing! hehe

Thank you so much for the review! Am truly chuffed that you like it so much because it is just so weird to imagine!

Glad you noticed the dream-like quality because that is what I was going for. Didn't want it to seem real because of the contrasting characters of Josie...anyways, before I get too deep and rambly!

Basically thank you! You rock! =D

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[pdglyph]

Wow... I've never had any inclination to read a pairing featuing Josie, but this was amazingly sexy and I was just sitting here going 'You go girl!'

[beccierocks]

Thanks m'dear! Glad I made you feel that way about Josie! =D
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[almostjulie]

Interesting pairing, very hot, and like Clay I enjoyed the contrast between Josie in Jeff's mind and strong seductive actual Josie.

[beccierocks]

Thank you! =) The rep of Josie in this is just how I see her. Some episodes she comes across as quite timid and others (and also in real life) she just comes across as so confident and can hold her own. That's what I wanted. =D Glad you liked it! =)

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[sungreen70]

Not to sound like a broken record, but whoa! That pairing! I do believe you are the only one in the comm who's ever tackled Josie/Jeff. And you did a great job with it.

I love your Josie. I can so easily imagine her being like this in her real life relationships - totally in control and in charge. I know you mentioned this was based on a dream, and there is a dreamlike quality to it. You feel it even before Jeff says "I want to know if I'm dreaming or not".

One minor, minor nitpick - you mention Josie's "tiny frame", but I don't think she's all that tiny. I believe she's about 5'10, and she seems pretty solidly built. But that is a very minor quibble and doesn't take away from the story at all :) Nicely done!