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[New Fic] Movie Night

May 19, 2008 16:14

Movie Night
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p: colin/ryan, a: mizzmeow, p: greg/jeff

Comments 8

caelith May 19 2008, 23:30:42 UTC

Ah ha ha! Norty but very edible X)

mizzmeow May 19 2008, 23:35:32 UTC

LOL! Thanks, Cae. My muse wanted me to write norty today. :)

annabel1984 May 20 2008, 08:41:38 UTC

very sexy and naughty!

mizzmeow May 20 2008, 15:09:17 UTC

Thanks, Annabel! :D

clayangel May 20 2008, 12:48:27 UTC

*laughs* Aw, that was cute. ^_^ I liked the repetition and evolution of the movie line in every paragraph. It was different and interesting and did a good job of urging me onto each subsequent line.

mizzmeow May 20 2008, 15:11:58 UTC

Thank you so much, Clay.:D This was kind of a different style for me, so I'm very glad that it worked to keep you interested in what came next.

ktnflag May 28 2008, 22:52:06 UTC

Ha! I loved it! Very naughty & hot :-) Especially this part...

They both gave a bravo, when Ryan and Colin came in unison. They didn’t know how they did it, but they were always impressed when they did

...and the last line is just brilliant! Very well done! :-)

mizzmeow May 28 2008, 23:52:05 UTC

Ha! I loved it! Very naughty & hot :-)

Yay, that you loved it!!! It just kind of flowed out of my fingers. Which is unusual for smut when I write it. *snicker*

..and the last line is just brilliant! Very well done! :-)

*blushes* Thank you!!! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. :D