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More than a Woman's Work

Nov 14, 2007 20:01

Title: More Than a Woman's Work

Author: The Empress of a three box moment...
Pairing: Ryan and Colin
Rating: PG Angst
Word Count: 3,497
Summary: I heard this song by Kate Bush and immediately fell in love with it. Instantly something said "If you write it, they will come..." Or something like that...too many movies...Anyway, enjoy!
Disclaimer: I ( Read more... )

g: angst, g: songfic, p: colin/ryan, a: the_empressar

Comments 11

the_empressar November 15 2007, 01:06:23 UTC

*THESE COMMENTS WERE FROM THE ORIGINAL POST ( ... )

theinnuendo November 15 2007, 03:13:42 UTC

I love this. I actually am kinda speachless, and its really not sinking in. It also scared me slightly i was reading it dead in time with the music :S
I am struggling so hard not to cry, or rush and try and find Ryan to comfort, and Greg, oh god damn it everyone. I think a group hug is needed here guys *initiate group hug*

Amaazing, you really captured the sense of dispair in the loss of a loved one
Beautiful
xxx

the_empressar November 15 2007, 13:45:38 UTC

AAAWWWWWW WOMAN!!!! I'll join in the BIG GROUP HUG!!! We all need a bit of comforting after that, I agree!!! I had the song on repeat when I was writing it so at some given point in the story sometimes the music would crescendo and I'd write to fit it. It really helped me in bringing the feel out.

Thank you for reading my friend. It was all I could hope for to capture that sense, and do it adequately.

Thanks again!!

so very sad.............. ryansgal63 November 17 2007, 17:03:58 UTC

*many tears* this was so sad..........I refuse to to cry...it hurts too much to cry.........physically and emotionally......*sniff*

*hugs Ryan*

D: oakapea December 2 2007, 20:52:55 UTC

I managed to keep strong and not cry... until the letter. This is such an incredible emotional piece, and I would say I hated it because Colin is dead, but I'd be lying. I love this, even though it makes me really sad. I'm just glad this never happened, and hope like hell it never will.

Good job.

Re: D: the_empressar December 4 2007, 04:37:45 UTC

*gives you a comforting pat* Thank you for reading this my friend:) I don't want to fathom the thought of my adoramable sweetie in this situation. It's just that I get into one of these moods sometimes, and I cannot resist the call to write. I see you've written a fic and I'm looking forward to sitting down and reading it. WELCOME aboard!!! Hope to see more from you soon!!

Thank you for the comment!!!!

sungreen70 January 16 2008, 02:03:17 UTC

Oh, man. This was so powerful. I actually felt shaky reading about Colin dying - anything that makes me feel genuine emotion like that is damn good writing! I really liked Ryan and Greg comforting each other too - it made me smile even when I could barely see my computer through my teary eyes. Beautiful work, my dear!

(****wails****)

the_empressar January 17 2008, 03:41:26 UTC

Awww Sunny Girl!! I haven't seen you in a while!! I hope you are doing okie:) Thank you for reading this and I'm sorry I brought on the tears, this really got to me too...it was one of those overwhelming moments that just hit me all at once and flowed freely from the keyboard. I seem to do quite well with this topic, unfortunately...sigh...but I'd rather it flow than force it...nods...n e ways it's nice to cya and thankyou for the BEAUTIFUL comment!!!!!