Thank you. ^_^ Honestly, I think it's nice to see a new story from me, too. Unfortunately, inspiration is few and far between these days. Hopefully autumn will bring about a change.
Instead they lay together, eyes closed, heartbeats rapid with fear and loathing for a continued conversation that never went anywhere but round and round in endless circles, always turning up at any inopportune moment.
I'm particularly fond of this line. Don't know why ^_^
I like the feel of this quite a lot. It's sweet and a little bit sad. And very, very good.
Instead they lay together, eyes closed, heartbeats rapid with fear and loathing for a continued conversation that never went anywhere but round and round in endless circles, always turning up at any inopportune moment. -I really like this line, too. And it was this line that reminded me of Brae/Rick this morning. Sort of describes their situation back in the day, don't you think?
The last paragraph is absolutely adorable. ^_^ And I think you've nailed Wayne just right which, I swear to God, is fucking impossible. So major, major points there. And Jeff's spot-on. :)
The last sentence is particularly nice. Sort of powerful, if that makes sense. And I think it tied everything together nicely. It's that same sort of melancholy, sweet feel.
I really, really like this. ^_^ Great job, honey. *kiss*
And it was this line that reminded me of Brae/Rick this morning. Sort of describes their situation back in the day, don't you think? -- Mm, yes. I do.
And I think you've nailed Wayne just right -- Really? I haven't written him in ages. I didn't even think about it. I suppose I've done a lot of pondering him over the years, though.
I didn't know that they'd worked together before. -- I only found out through asuka14, actually. She is (was?) a bit of a Wayne nut, so she knows more about him than anyone I know. Also, they were on that show with Jonathan Mangum (at least I think so), who was later on Green Screen. I just wish I could find some old episodes of this show. It'd be incredibly interesting to me to see young Wayne and young Jeff interacting.
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This was nice story too!Nice pairing, nice atmosphere and all in this story
ok lets not say story anymore :D
So thank you!
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I'm particularly fond of this line. Don't know why ^_^
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Instead they lay together, eyes closed, heartbeats rapid with fear and loathing for a continued conversation that never went anywhere but round and round in endless circles, always turning up at any inopportune moment. -I really like this line, too. And it was this line that reminded me of Brae/Rick this morning. Sort of describes their situation back in the day, don't you think?
The last paragraph is absolutely adorable. ^_^ And I think you've nailed Wayne just right which, I swear to God, is fucking impossible. So major, major points there. And Jeff's spot-on. :)
The last sentence is particularly nice. Sort of powerful, if that makes sense. And I think it tied everything together nicely. It's that same sort of melancholy, sweet feel.
I really, really like this. ^_^ Great job, honey. *kiss*
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And I think you've nailed Wayne just right -- Really? I haven't written him in ages. I didn't even think about it. I suppose I've done a lot of pondering him over the years, though.
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We don't see that pairing often, nor do we have a lot of pre-Whose Line fics. I didn't know that they'd worked together before.
I think I'm repeating what others have said but it's true, they are spot-on. Very IC.
Hope you post more fics soon. Cheers.
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I didn't know that they'd worked together before. -- I only found out through asuka14, actually. She is (was?) a bit of a Wayne nut, so she knows more about him than anyone I know. Also, they were on that show with Jonathan Mangum (at least I think so), who was later on Green Screen. I just wish I could find some old episodes of this show. It'd be incredibly interesting to me to see young Wayne and young Jeff interacting.
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